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Hush

Sweet silence surrounds us. My dear, hear the hush out here in the country away from town’s rush. Out here are serenity’s meadows so lush. This spot where we’ve chosen to sit feels like plush. And listen, my dear, to the song of a thrush. It sings to the tune of a stream’s sudden gush! Feb. 27, 2023 For Writing Challenge -H Words - Poetry Contest Sponsor: Constance La France

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Date: 3/2/2023 1:23:00 AM
Andrea, wonderfully penned congratulations on your win in my Writing Challenge - H Words, well done, blessings, Constance
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Date: 2/28/2023 7:57:00 PM
A romantic write, Andrea. I felt the serenity... :) Congrats on your winning placement!
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Date: 2/28/2023 1:41:00 PM
Back with Congratulations on your win.  It was a good "H" word for you. Have a blessed day.............
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Date: 2/28/2023 10:12:00 AM
- Back with a congratulations, Andrea :) - hugs
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Date: 2/28/2023 9:59:00 AM
Beautiful, Andrea! I especially love, "serenity's meadows so lush. Congratulations!
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Date: 2/27/2023 9:02:00 PM
We must listen to the sounds of nature as we sit plushly on the grass in a meadow, enjoy the surrounding calm and be be at one with it - such wise words my friend please forgive me I have had only small intervaldfrom work so my comments were sparse as and could only rely wit s comment when I had a moment. A delight to read this write. Hope you are well Andrea love and hugs Jennifer.
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Date: 2/27/2023 5:13:00 PM
He got up, rebuked the wind and said to the waves, “Quiet! Be still!” Then the wind died down and it was completely calm. Mark 4:39 NIV : ),. Love your poem, I also love the country out away from towns rush,.
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Date: 2/27/2023 1:47:00 PM
I enjoyed this one. A good "H" word. Good Luck. Have a blessed day writing away...................
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Date: 2/27/2023 12:54:00 PM
Nice job, Andrea. Monorhymes are very difficult to write without sounding forced. This is a good one:)
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Date: 2/27/2023 11:46:00 AM
A melodious poem , so sweet to read. Best for a win.
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Date: 2/27/2023 11:38:00 AM
A lovey well-crafted poem, Andrea. Good luck with the contest.
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Date: 2/27/2023 11:21:00 AM
- A lovely hush, Andrea :) - GL in the contest :) - hugs
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