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Hurt

I leave my tears here, on this white sheet my sorrow; now, the white is stained- The words hurt deeply, like a dagger plunged into my heart. __________________________ October 1, 2019 Poetry/Tanka/Hurt Copyright Protected, ID 19-1185-408-02 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. Written for the FFI Blog Series, 15- Tanka Brian Strand Podium Place 1

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Date: 10/1/2019 3:00:00 PM
Beauty within your sadness!;)
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Constance La France
Date: 10/1/2019 7:43:00 PM
Brenda, thank you so much !
Date: 10/1/2019 2:54:00 PM
Good tanka… it has much depth and touches this reader.
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Constance La France
Date: 10/1/2019 7:44:00 PM
Debra, thanks for the great comment !
Date: 10/1/2019 2:02:00 PM
... and I leave my tears here ... so touching, D.H. - hugs // Anne-Lise :(
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Constance La France
Date: 10/1/2019 7:44:00 PM
Anne-Lise thank you so much !

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