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Hurricane

_______Pleiades______ Harsh winds terrorize and Heave cars. carving, shredding Houses. cyclones form with Heavy rains, torrential, Hammer down, substantial. Hail rips at my roof, then Hysteria erupts. .......:JP) The Pleiades is aptly named: The seven lines can be said to represent the seven sisters, and the six syllables represent the nearly invisible nature of one sister...

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Date: 8/27/2009 12:19:00 PM
Quite awesome this piece Jared, and darned powerful>>James
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Date: 7/22/2009 12:08:00 AM
Awesome write....
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Date: 7/21/2009 3:18:00 PM
Good Job, Jared, I could almost tell where the story was going by reading, the first word in each line! Blessing, Moses
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Date: 7/19/2009 10:07:00 PM
interesting format-great write--charma
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