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Hunchback Whales

Amongst idle clouds tis by stealthy through labyrinth sky. Voyaging ships crowd caught sight hunchback whales' rare eyes delight. Steel blue wind-driven waves rise; playground for three gray whales’ cries. They breach, slap the cold waters delight, rough surface shatters. 3/7/2019

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Constance La France

Date: 3/8/2019 7:42:00 PM

Eve, beautifully penned, best of luck in the contest ~

Eve Roper
Date: 3/8/2019 9:53:00 PM

Thank you, Dear Heart. Hugs Eve ~`*

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 3/8/2019 6:21:00 PM

I do love me some whales...and with lovely imagery :)

Eve Roper
Date: 3/8/2019 9:53:00 PM

Thank you, Kim. Hugs Eve ~`*

M. L. Kiser

Date: 3/8/2019 10:02:00 AM

I do love whales; have you been whale-watching lately? Lovely poem.

Eve Roper
Date: 3/8/2019 9:53:00 PM

Thank you, M.L.... :) No, but would love too. Hugs Eve ~`*

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 3/8/2019 6:55:00 AM

Eve, if you are not standing on a ship watching whales at this very second, I will eat my desk. Or if you were not standing on a ship at the very second you wrote this. Well done indeed! I feel like I saw those whales now.

Eve Roper
Date: 3/8/2019 9:52:00 PM

Thank you, Caren, loved the video had to write about it. Hugs Eve ~`*