Eve Roper Poet Jueju

Hunchback Whales

Amongst idle clouds tis by
stealthy through labyrinth sky.
Voyaging ships crowd caught sight
hunchback whales' rare eyes delight.

Steel blue wind-driven waves rise;
playground for three gray whales’ cries.
They breach, slap the cold waters
delight, rough surface shatters.


3/7/2019

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Constance La France March 8, 2019 at 7:42 PM Eve, beautifully penned, best of luck in the contest ~ Eve Roper March 8, 2019 at 9:53 PM Thank you, Dear Heart. Hugs Eve ~`*

Kim Rodrigues March 8, 2019 at 6:21 PM I do love me some whales...and with lovely imagery :) Eve Roper March 8, 2019 at 9:53 PM Thank you, Kim. Hugs Eve ~`*

M. L. Kiser March 8, 2019 at 10:02 AM I do love whales; have you been whale-watching lately? Lovely poem. Eve Roper March 8, 2019 at 9:53 PM Thank you, M.L.... :) No, but would love too. Hugs Eve ~`*

Caren Krutsinger March 8, 2019 at 6:55 AM Eve, if you are not standing on a ship watching whales at this very second, I will eat my desk. Or if you were not standing on a ship at the very second you wrote this. Well done indeed! I feel like I saw those whales now. Eve Roper March 8, 2019 at 9:52 PM Thank you, Caren, loved the video had to write about it. Hugs Eve ~`*