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Hummingbird

Thy swifts of season a beauty evanescent... sweet succulent love

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Skat A

Date: 5/23/2015 11:53:00 AM

oo so sweet

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 6/28/2010 9:51:00 AM

Congratulations Rick on your win in A Rambling Poet's contest "Bird's". Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/26/2010 11:12:00 PM

Short and sweet does it for sure! congratulations. LUv, Andrea

Tirzah Conway

Date: 6/26/2010 11:57:00 AM

Beautiful Haiku, Rick-Congrat's on your win!~Tirzah~

Joyce Johnson

Date: 6/26/2010 9:17:00 AM

Great haiku. Congratulations. Love, Joyce

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 6/26/2010 9:01:00 AM

this is just such a wonderful haiku, Rick--I especially liked your 2nd line :) --congrats on your win & btw it was really my pleasure to see your name in my winners' list :) --nikko :)

Constance La France

Date: 6/25/2010 10:42:00 PM

Congratulations, Rick, on 10th place, in my Bird Contest, with this lovely haiku on the hummingbird.. love constance

Rick Parise

Date: 6/25/2010 7:31:00 AM

I love this one I wrote , I had to put it out there one more time !~Rick

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 4/29/2010 8:03:00 PM

Congrats on the win

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/28/2010 9:39:00 PM

very beautiful one! congrats!

Margaret Foster

Date: 4/27/2010 8:36:00 PM

Hi Rick. Congratulations on your success with this delightful haiku. Swifts--very appropriate....Margaret

Mitch White

Date: 4/27/2010 4:23:00 PM

Flowing Haiku Congrats to you Rick

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 4/27/2010 6:49:00 AM

Congrats Rick on your winning poem in the contest by Raul.. amazing words to depict the photo of the hummingbird.. enjoy my friend..luv.. "Sweetheart"

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 4/27/2010 5:54:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Raul Moreno's contest "Daily Ritual" Rick. Love, Carol

Raul Moreno

Date: 4/27/2010 3:01:00 AM

Rick, congratulations on your success in my Daily Ritual contest...Raul

Constance La France

Date: 4/26/2010 1:18:00 PM

Very pretty words, best of luck in the contest, now for your assignment in my contest, I will give you the topic of... taking the time to enjoy life... love constance

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 4/26/2010 12:45:00 PM

enjoyed nicely penned!!

Carrie Richards

Date: 4/26/2010 7:32:00 AM

A beauty evanescent.....describes your senryu!! Lovely words!! Good luck Rick!! :)