Huge One, Little One - Collab With James Fraser

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HUGE ONE, little one What does she have to make me feel this way? What does she do that makes her huge one sway? When she makes her huge one sway Rainbows rush to paint their play All day he wants to be with her, so he stays But what does she have, to make him feel this way.... A cozy home, I found in her arms~ Beautiful she, a canopy flooding love When I lay my head upon her shoulders, I'm tall, she's small, but we're we... Nightly our bodies meet to know if we're we Vacation times passed, we glided in merry sweet Darling, behold, my gaze that softly speaks: our true love banner bearing no defeat Always with you, I plunge deep the ocean floors as there in your arms-- I've found heaven's door. Chest to chest with you I've reached Everest's peak our heartbeats ride a supple frenzy heat What does he have to make me feel this way? What does he do that makes her little one sway? When he makes her little one sway, blinking twin stars shines to say All day she wants to be with him, so she stays What does he have to make her feel this way.... I read "forever" mirrored in his eyes: his soul's windows, uttering no disguise When together...we glow afire of wonder Memories, we weave to always remember If ever parted, I will be blue, hence for always, I pray: "May God see us through" Genes we yearn to spill, soon we will, we will. as we want to build one, 'lil nation with care He and I, two babies, we want in between. Sugar, spices, all blend to colour our life as our words wound, amidst webs of dreams. We embrace strong in our esteem, strangers whose eyes witness our affair Unstoppable they say: "We are a lovely pair", Forever in love, our aim shall be Huge one, little one, will become more than thee! ____________________________________________ © 14.34 pm, April 04, 2015

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Constance La France

Date: 6/3/2015 11:51:00 PM

Olive, well done. Beautiful is your pens and thanks for visiting my poem, bite

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/6/2015 5:34:00 AM

- I really love this !! (7) - A pleasure to have a friend to write along with :) - Easter almost over and dailylife restarts, I wish you a great week dear Olive ! - hugs & <3 // Anne-Lise :)

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 4/9/2015 8:01:00 PM

===Indeed, it is a pleasure to write with someone who as well reciprocate the same thoughts.. ?! Thanks much Anne lise, amiga.. hugs back! //O_E

Eileen Manassian

Date: 4/5/2015 5:00:00 AM

That some passionate write, you two...Hugs one Little one...How sweet. Keep writing and making history together. :)

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 4/9/2015 7:58:00 PM

==Thanks so much Jade.. ? I so appreciate your drop by.. ?! Weeee, you are among the most passionate writers here in Soup//O_E

Jan Allison

Date: 4/5/2015 3:10:00 AM

Your partnership goes from strength to strength Olive I so adore your writes together and separately but when you find the right one to write with never let them them go - I hope and pray one day Darren and I write again. Such a wonderful romantic write my friends - i adore the love that pours from every line:-) Hugs jan xx 7

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 4/9/2015 7:59:00 PM

==Thank you sweet Jan… Weeee, I so remember how you and Darren write together… I pray the Darren comes back and you two write again.. :) ! Weeee, James isn't letting me go I hope… and we just write when the a muse struck us.. Indeed, this poem is reality inspired… :) hugs back//O_E

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 4/5/2015 1:13:00 AM

Dino James, another collab from us.. :) our partnered writes just goes on and on.. our pens strikes at anywhere from light poetry to serious topics to love overflowing topics.. :)! I so enjoyed writing this with you... :) Well, I presume you are a HUGE ONE.. not just by height but heart and mind... :D I can relate to this subject that much..weeeee! there are lines here that made me feel giddy and warm as it brings much memories I long to do again.. :)! warm hugs, xxx//olive eloisa w/ a wink ;)!

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 4/8/2015 12:09:00 AM

Yes, why not.. :)! I always like to start with something inspirational.. :)! I like that blossomed by many wishes.. :D! weeee. tight hugs!

James Fraser
Date: 4/5/2015 1:56:00 PM

I love our partnered writes little one, and yes so many topics also. Weeeee giddy and warm, love you like this Oliz, winks back ;-) already thinking up other ideas. Maybe a Faith one like you mentioned a few days back, yea? Mega hugs and Cuddles, Blossomed by many Wishes //Dino James // xxxx

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 4/5/2015 1:15:00 AM

thank you for writing it with me.. :D! and am eyes open to another thoughtful collab with you.. :D! //olive eloisa :)