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How long will this night linger, my love? How long will dreams serve as emissary? Visions of love and passion so necessary Convey deep love we share from above Hour by hour, painfully slow are the days Warm thoughts run rampant I walk in a haze Sleep elusive, rarely visits as my heart's ablaze For in slumber I could touch you...through the haze This yearning to gaze deeply into your eyes To dwell in the sunshine of our eternal ties How incessantly I pray as I look to the sky That you'd borrow wings to bring you nigh Into these warm, vacant and eager arms Which long to hold you; come share my charms ~*~

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 1/17/2010 12:31:00 AM
Best wishes with this one Auf=drey.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments today.
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Date: 1/16/2010 3:04:00 PM
Beautifully written poem Audrey, Thanks so much for you gracious comment. Sincerely, Love, Moses
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Date: 1/16/2010 10:14:00 AM
Audrey this is great!!! is it for the longing for love poetry contest?? It'd go perfect!!!! and you'd have a great chance of winning
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Date: 1/16/2010 7:53:00 AM
Sweet write Audrey, lucky guy >> James
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Date: 1/16/2010 4:07:00 AM
Love is so right, your poem a winner for us all thanks Daniel
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Date: 1/15/2010 10:04:00 PM
Unconditional love and romantic poetry, which allows me to experience the author's experience vicariously. Great Write Audrey. Best Wishes Always, Bill
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Date: 1/15/2010 9:40:00 PM
Passionate write, Audrey, very nice. Love the imagery used. Good luck on Laura's contest. And thank you for your great comments on my poem. Best wishes, Caroline.
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Date: 1/15/2010 2:10:00 PM
Lovely poem for your lover. We all long for such moments. Thanks for sharing.
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Date: 1/15/2010 10:44:00 AM
Wow! Really reaching out to your lover huh lol. I love this one and thanks for your comments, I have a few new ones up so feel free to read them and comment if you like. I always write but I feel waiting to post new poems will create a big demand for my work. Great write!
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Date: 1/15/2010 8:34:00 AM
Well-written, beautifully worded! Thanks for the kind sentiments on my latest write.---Milt
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Date: 1/15/2010 12:16:00 AM
Beautiful poetry Audrey.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments
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Date: 1/14/2010 10:15:00 PM
Good poem!
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Date: 1/14/2010 6:56:00 PM
This is beautiful Audrey. It won't be too long...Marty
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Date: 1/14/2010 6:51:00 PM
Such a beautiful sonnet, Audrey!! The contest has inspired some great work and I think you'll do very well with this entry. Everyone can relate to the feelings you describe. Love, carolyn
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Date: 1/14/2010 4:54:00 PM
Just beautiful, Audrey. Is it for the contest? It should do very well!
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Date: 1/14/2010 4:39:00 PM
Beautiful love and romantic sonnet. Keep the creative pen flowing. Thanks for the comments on my poem about Big Daddy(My Husband's Father). Sara
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