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How far from earth are heaven and hell?

How far from earth are heaven and hell? And which way do you go to get there, pray tell? Did God create a GPS for the soul? Or did he give little devils or angels the role to escort you to the place where for eternity you'll dwell?

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Lin Lane

Date: 3/18/2025 2:47:00 PM

You're very skilled at writing this way and if your syllable counts were appropriate, they'd be Limericks.

Lin Lane
Date: 3/18/2025 3:28:00 PM

You might try 10/10/6/6/10 if you need more room.

Marinus Jansen
Date: 3/18/2025 3:00:00 PM

Thanks, Lin. Limerick is always what I strive for, but most of the time I can't figure out the perfect 8-9/8-9/5-6/5-6/8-9 syllable count. I should try harder. :-).