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How Do You Feel Today 2

A vision ~ as my inner being implodes, I become numb and wear an outer air of calm.

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Valsa George

Date: 10/18/2023 9:25:00 PM

You keep astounding me with your artistry and make me grief stricken with your sad musings ! Calm arising from numbness is more dangerous than violent tantrums! A monoku deeply penetrating, dear DD !

Di11y Da11y
Date: 10/18/2023 11:13:00 PM

Thank you Valsa - I choose to write when emotions run high but I generally have my share of joy each day too. I'll try and capture some of that too x

Paige Hind

Date: 10/17/2023 12:34:00 PM

Deep work, DD!

Di11y Da11y
Date: 10/17/2023 12:41:00 PM

It's my inner artist getting all showy Paige - I'd never utter sentences like this in real life :)

Karen Jones

Date: 10/17/2023 11:47:00 AM

Wow. Reminds me of the training of meditation and mindfulness. Joining the inner with the outer can be challenging. I think this one is over my humble head. I am no less amazed by your word choice. Love and light hugs to you!

Di11y Da11y
Date: 10/17/2023 12:41:00 PM

You're very kind Karen, I almost wrote one the other day about being fine and dandy too - I should strike while the iron is hot x