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House of Broken Dreams

In the house of broken dreams Window panes are made of tears And the paper on the wall Draws the picture of my fears It's a never place to be Broken pieces line the floor The hopes that now once were Turn to mist forever more. Time to leave those dreams so cherished In old visions far behind To bravely seek the new, the real And healthy faith in what I'll find Let go, let God, move on Ahead toward what as yet may be And with the passing old to new Build a house called Me.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 10/29/2015 5:22:00 PM
Kathis, this is lovely! Janice
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Date: 10/29/2015 1:07:00 PM
Out of sad comes hopeful. I like the flow of this piece. Thanks for reading my stuff. Love, daver
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Date: 10/29/2015 12:21:00 PM
Nice metaphoric descriptiveness you have employed here. I see you are relatively new to this site. I know you will like it here.
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Date: 10/28/2015 2:05:00 PM
Excellent and profound rhyme poem. Welcome to Poetry Soup.
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Date: 10/28/2015 12:15:00 PM
I know the pain of living in such a house. Leaving is the only solution to creating new dreams...so keep your faith in God and pray. He's listening.
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Date: 10/28/2015 11:21:00 AM
Always believe in God, he love us all :))
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