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Horse of the Highlands

Lost was I amidst the Scottish highlands
          The evening sky was blushing heaven-kissed
               Hilltops pierced the dusky fog like islands
     As soft a horse came swimming thru the mist

Pausing to consider its intentions
          I stood there hypnotized and still as death
               Thus its beauty quelled my apprehensions
     And naught there was but magic in its breath

Like the grand Bucephalus he gestured
          Nodding with his head for me to follow
               With the trails deep in the brume and vestured
     Held no greater hopes until the morrow

Building in my gut were pangs of hunger
          Outside the hopes of finding further aid
               Sixty and not getting any younger
     My future hinged on choices to be made

Little left to lose I started hiking
          Just steps behind the stallion as he led
               Even in the dark his hide was striking
     His color white as sheets and purely bred

On we walked for miles through the night, dim
          Until I spied some farm lights further on
               Stopping to remember him and thank him
     But searching through the darkness ... he was gone.






~ 1st Place ~  in the "Some Paradise Where Horses Go" Poetry Contest, Michelle Faulkner, Judge & Sponsor.

~ 4th Place ~  in the "Eight Words Challenge - 24 Lines Maximum" Poetry Contest, Robert Haigh, Judge & Sponsor.

( Ten syllables/line, counted at HowManySyllables.com, no cliche's, via cliche' tool at PoetrySoup.com )
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Watt Avatar
April 4, 2020 at 12:44 AM
This is pure magic, Greg. Your imagery is always striking, but here telling a tale of a mystical, kindhearted horse who saves your life then disappears. Exceptional poetry - congrats on your first place, my friend!
Kauffman Avatar
April 3, 2020 at 1:06 AM
Mystical journey, Greg with beautiful imagery - one of your signature qualities! Congratulations on your first place win!
Marcum Wong Avatar
April 2, 2020 at 9:38 PM
This is a real beauty Greg! A deserving first placement my friend. Your horse in this story sounds enchanting! Congratulations on your Trophy win! xxoo
Faulkner Avatar
April 2, 2020 at 6:44 PM
Congratulations on 1st place in my contest, Gregory, mystical write-
Barden Avatar
April 2, 2020 at 7:44 PM
Thank you so much, Michelle - I am so pleased you enjoyed my poem! I have always loved horses, (especially Arabians), and riding them, and they will always be one of my favorite things. (There is truth to this story, too!) :o) <3
Rodrigues Avatar
March 16, 2018 at 4:51 AM
What a fantastical write! Loved the imagery and the end! Congrats!
Barden Avatar
March 22, 2018 at 2:31 AM
Very kind of you, Kim - thanks so much! :-) <3
Roper Avatar
March 15, 2018 at 9:18 PM
Wonderful imagery in your poem, Greg , and written very well using the required words. Congratulations on your win! Hugs ~`*
Barden Avatar
March 15, 2018 at 10:44 PM
Many kind thanks to you, Eve, for your wonderful comments - blessings, friend! :-) <3
Haight Avatar
March 15, 2018 at 7:18 PM
A very beautiful and mystical poem, Gregory, with many metaphorical thoughts to consider. Congratulations on your fine placement in the contest! Sandra
Barden Avatar
March 15, 2018 at 10:41 PM
That's so sweet of you, Sandra, and I so appreciate it, my friend ... I'm pleased you liked it! :-) <3
Tripp Avatar
March 15, 2018 at 4:59 PM
Congratulations, Gregory, on a beautiful write.
Barden Avatar
March 15, 2018 at 10:40 PM
Many thanks, Rhoda - blessings, friends! :-) <3
Canerdy Avatar
March 15, 2018 at 12:28 PM
Mesmerizing story, beautifully written, Greg. CONGRATS! Janice
Barden Avatar
March 15, 2018 at 10:39 PM
Thank you very much, Janice - blessings! :-) <3
Poteet Avatar
March 15, 2018 at 8:17 AM
A compelling read leaving plenty of room for speculation. Thanks for introducing me to Bucephalus, a new(B) for me from the annuls of history. Commendations on your win.
Barden Avatar
March 15, 2018 at 10:39 PM
Thank you, my friend - I was fascinated with horses as a kid, ever since I read about Alexander the Great and his amazing horse, Bucephalus. Glad you enjoyed it! :-)
Sinha-Roy Avatar
March 15, 2018 at 1:04 AM
Congratulations, Greg on your win as usual with a cascading lovely poem.
Barden Avatar
March 15, 2018 at 2:49 AM
Very kind of you, Subimal - thank you, friend! :-)
Gauthier Avatar
March 14, 2018 at 4:13 PM
Back with congrats, Gregory. Great write. Congrats.
Barden Avatar
March 15, 2018 at 12:13 AM
Many kind thank you's, Line! <3
Leiser Avatar
March 14, 2018 at 1:40 PM
Congrats on your win, Gregory! Wonderful poem :)
Barden Avatar
March 15, 2018 at 12:13 AM
Very kind of you, Laura - thanks! :-)
Allison Avatar
March 14, 2018 at 11:57 AM
what a mystical story you penned Greg I didn't realise it was for the contest until the end you wove the words in so well:-) hugs jan xx
Barden Avatar
March 15, 2018 at 12:12 AM
Oh, that's so sweet of you, Jan, thank you so much! I'm pleased you enjoyed this one ... it was a bit different tack for me, and enjoyable! Blessings, Dear Friend! :-) <3
Gauthier Avatar
March 12, 2018 at 2:35 PM
Awesome ghostly imagery. A beautiful poem, Gregory.
Barden Avatar
March 13, 2018 at 12:52 AM
That's very sweet of you, Line - thanks so much! :-) <3
Gentile Avatar
March 12, 2018 at 1:00 PM
I really enjoyed this, Greg, it created such a mystical feeling as I was reading. Best of luck in the contest !!
Barden Avatar
March 13, 2018 at 12:52 AM
Thank you very much, Mike, I'm pleased you liked it, Friend! :-)
Cunningham Avatar
March 12, 2018 at 4:09 AM
Loved this one, the highlands are beautiful but when the weather changes can be deadly. Good luck in the contest Gregory. Tom
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