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Hoping For Words With Greatness

My optimistic muse without any press, Turned herself into a hollyhock princess. I admired her velvety soft pink dress. She came closer for a gentle caress. Give me ideas, so I can progress I said, hoping for words with greatness. She danced a clog in my heart I confess. But she is tricky, and not full of finesse

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M. L. Kiser

Date: 12/10/2019 3:27:00 PM

"She danced a clog in my heart I confess." Now, there's a picture!

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 12/10/2019 11:43:00 PM

I love clog dancing. LOVE IT!

Alexis Y.

Date: 12/10/2019 1:26:00 AM

Hi Caren, You muse is amazing, I agree with what she has to say:-) Alexis

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 12/10/2019 3:45:00 AM

I am glad you stopped by!

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 12/9/2019 6:29:00 PM

This is delightful and fun, Caren. a hollyhock princess-how novel! :)

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 12/9/2019 11:33:00 PM

Thank you Evelyn. I am glad you liked it.

Ann Foster

Date: 12/9/2019 3:39:00 PM

If I had to guess... I love this one the besssst... lol... that did not work.. for me... Yours was wonderful... Excellent work. fun... Ann

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 12/9/2019 11:33:00 PM

Thank you Ann. When I am ready for a monorhyme, I am ready for a monorhyme. They are so much fun!

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 12/9/2019 11:20:00 AM

Oh so well penned my dear friend - 'But she is tricky, and not full of finesse' May your Christmas be blessed my friend love and blessings to you and yours, Hugs, Jennifer.

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 12/9/2019 11:56:00 AM

Thank you Jennifer. Blessings back.

Panagiota Romios

Date: 12/9/2019 8:29:00 AM

This piem is a charmer Panagiota

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 12/9/2019 9:37:00 AM

Thank you Panagiota. I love a monorhyme.

Kai Michael Neumann

Date: 12/9/2019 5:13:00 AM

Very well penned. A dance at a glance ...Kind wishes, Kai

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 12/9/2019 9:38:00 AM

I am liking your comment Kai.

Anil Deo

Date: 12/9/2019 3:53:00 AM

A wonderful substitute muse. I loved hollyhocks as a kid, especially the seeds ... little black ovals string like a tight centipeedy necklace. Thanks 4visiting; Happy Holidays. Peace, Joy (& justice)!

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 12/9/2019 9:43:00 AM

I LOVE hollyhocks! I wish I had some.