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I took the phrase 'Hope Committed Suicide' from Lyric Man who also publishes on Poetry Soup. Thank you kindly.

Hope Committed Suicide (indebted for the expression to Lyric Man) She jumped from formidable heights of evaporated elevation All beacons of guidance vanished shine had varnished defeat Dried parched tears scorched desiccated rasping lonely vapour An overpass too far a tower too high a case too deep of closure The draw bridge suspended the heaving weights festooned Floodgates’ mooring unlocked her turnstile spinning reason The parachute of resilient doubt reopened The bungee merely scraped Pandora’s box The trampoline projected springs into the sky Hope committed suicide and failed in miserable stark persuasion

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 6/25/2018 8:25:00 PM
Intriguing ink, Kai! ~ Gershon
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Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 6/27/2018 5:31:00 AM
Thank you. My ink regarding that subject is full on at the moment. Lots of trouble within my family, Kai
Date: 6/25/2018 11:20:00 AM
I agree with Lyric Man. Elain
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Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 6/27/2018 5:27:00 AM
Thank you, Kai
Date: 6/25/2018 6:50:00 AM
Kai.. I loved reading your poem over a cup of hot coffee this morning. Your write is interesting and it was a joy to read! thank you for the acknowledgement of the quote!
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