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Hope Beyond the Rope

Sebastian hangs at the end of a rope, crows pecking hungrily at his blue eyes! For her tomorrow, is now filled with hope When he had reached deep between her thighs. In the dark she imagined just one thing, crows pecking hungrily at his blue eyes! The sight of his blue eyes made her heart sing. She felt a warm sensation down below. In the dark she imagined just one thing. What she desired was gentle and slow. Sebastian had painful things on his mind. She felt a warm sensation down below! Within his room, there forcibly confined. Her screaming was like music to his ears. Sebastian had painful things on his mind. He kept her there for many many years. Her screaming was like music to his ears! Sebastian hangs at the end of a rope. For her tomorrow is now filled with hope! My entry into the Deep and Dark Poetry Contest

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Date: 1/10/2016 8:28:00 PM
A real horror Richard and deep and dark. Well done... Verlena
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Date: 1/8/2016 10:26:00 AM
Loved how it all unraveled.... Sebastian got his own! Great feat, Richard!!!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/9/2016 7:50:00 AM
Thanks Wilfred.
Date: 1/8/2016 7:46:00 AM
Hi Richard: Great poem style and very intense! My compliments.I Hope you had a nice holiday in Toronto.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/8/2016 9:37:00 AM
Thanks Ralph, we did have a nice Holiday however we spent it in Vancouver this year.
Date: 1/7/2016 8:13:00 AM
really dark...
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/7/2016 9:50:00 AM
Don't be frightened off, you might find my other writing to be somewhat brighter in content. Thanks for visiting and commenting.
Date: 1/6/2016 3:43:00 PM
This is so deep and dark poem , I think this extraordinary piece is a winner , good luck in the contest my friend and hugs / / :) dalia
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/6/2016 7:47:00 PM
Hugs back and thanks for the visit.
Date: 1/5/2016 10:47:00 PM
Boy this is icky and dark.....but good...will do well..
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/6/2016 7:49:00 PM
Thanks Donna, this is not a preference in writing. I prefer somewhat happier pieces.
Date: 1/5/2016 6:30:00 PM
Well, you have to stay up late and feast on spicy food to come up with ones like this. The imagery invites and its implications tantalize.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/6/2016 7:49:00 PM
Thanks Mark, much appreciated.
Date: 1/5/2016 4:12:00 PM
your poetic diversity is amazing Richard, this is excellent..happy new year.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/6/2016 7:50:00 PM
You as well my friend.
Date: 1/5/2016 2:09:00 PM
the eerie feel is amazing, rich... well done with much meaning.. huggs
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/6/2016 7:50:00 PM
Hugs back to you Nette.
Date: 1/5/2016 9:56:00 AM
Whoa...the Terzanelle king strikes with a dark write. Very disturbing images. Saw your reply to Eileen...a pity this won't make it. Impressive, nonetheless, Rick.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/6/2016 7:52:00 PM
As always you are kind. Thanks Kim.
Date: 1/5/2016 9:27:00 AM
Oh...that is dark dark dark dark, Richard. SO dark and in terzanelle as well. Wow. This should do well. Great write as always. It is not good to be abused.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/5/2016 9:31:00 AM
I went back and read the rules and this one does not meet the rules. Just like a man to write first and read later, *lol*.

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