Richard Lamoureux Poet Terzanelle

Hope Beyond the Rope

Sebastian hangs at the end of a rope,
crows pecking hungrily at his blue eyes!
For her tomorrow, is now filled with hope

When he had reached deep between her thighs.
In the dark she imagined just one thing,
crows pecking hungrily at his blue eyes!

The sight of his blue eyes made her heart sing.
She felt a warm sensation down below.
In the dark she imagined just one thing.

What she desired was gentle and slow.
Sebastian had painful things on his mind.
She felt a warm sensation down below!

Within his room, there forcibly confined.
Her screaming was like music to his ears.
Sebastian had painful things on his mind.

He kept her there for many many years.
Her screaming was like music to his ears!
Sebastian hangs at the end of a rope.
For her tomorrow is now filled with hope!

My entry into the Deep and Dark Poetry Contest

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Verlena S. Walker January 10, 2016 at 8:28 PM A real horror Richard and deep and dark. Well done... Verlena

Wilfred Aniagyei January 8, 2016 at 10:26 AM Loved how it all unraveled.... Sebastian got his own! Great feat, Richard!!! Richard Lamoureux January 9, 2016 at 7:50 AM Thanks Wilfred.

Ralph Sergi January 8, 2016 at 7:46 AM Hi Richard: Great poem style and very intense! My compliments.I Hope you had a nice holiday in Toronto. Richard Lamoureux January 8, 2016 at 9:37 AM Thanks Ralph, we did have a nice Holiday however we spent it in Vancouver this year.

White Sage January 7, 2016 at 8:13 AM really dark... Richard Lamoureux January 7, 2016 at 9:50 AM Don't be frightened off, you might find my other writing to be somewhat brighter in content. Thanks for visiting and commenting.

Dalia Shahein January 6, 2016 at 3:43 PM This is so deep and dark poem , I think this extraordinary piece is a winner , good luck in the contest my friend and hugs / / :) dalia Richard Lamoureux January 6, 2016 at 7:47 PM Hugs back and thanks for the visit.

Donna Jones January 5, 2016 at 10:47 PM Boy this is icky and dark.....but good...will do well.. Richard Lamoureux January 6, 2016 at 7:49 PM Thanks Donna, this is not a preference in writing. I prefer somewhat happier pieces.

Mark Peterson January 5, 2016 at 6:30 PM Well, you have to stay up late and feast on spicy food to come up with ones like this. The imagery invites and its implications tantalize. Richard Lamoureux January 6, 2016 at 7:49 PM Thanks Mark, much appreciated.

Harry Horsman January 5, 2016 at 4:12 PM your poetic diversity is amazing Richard, this is excellent..happy new year. Richard Lamoureux January 6, 2016 at 7:50 PM You as well my friend.

Nette Onclaud January 5, 2016 at 2:09 PM the eerie feel is amazing, rich... well done with much meaning.. huggs Richard Lamoureux January 6, 2016 at 7:50 PM Hugs back to you Nette.

Kp Nunez January 5, 2016 at 9:56 AM Whoa...the Terzanelle king strikes with a dark write. Very disturbing images. Saw your reply to Eileen...a pity this won't make it. Impressive, nonetheless, Rick. Richard Lamoureux January 6, 2016 at 7:52 PM As always you are kind. Thanks Kim.

Eileen Manassian January 5, 2016 at 9:27 AM Oh...that is dark dark dark dark, Richard. SO dark and in terzanelle as well. Wow. This should do well. Great write as always. It is not good to be abused. Richard Lamoureux January 5, 2016 at 9:31 AM I went back and read the rules and this one does not meet the rules. Just like a man to write first and read later, *lol*.