Hope At Its Zenith

It was a day of jubilation, 
                       A majestic country got its independence 
                         After a hundred years of being ruled. 

                            It was also a day of utter gloom, 
                      The majestic country with ancient culture, 
                                    was divided into two -
                     As if a devastating Earthquake split the land
                    Forcing millions to leave their ancestral homes.
                   On one disastrous night, eyes blinded with tears, 
             millions of people trudged to the other side of the border.
 
                        Leave their priceless memories, for ever, 
                 To begin life in a foreign land they had never known. 
             Families who owned acres of land, and pleasant dwellings, 
                found themselves penniless, no roof above their head,
                            Struggling for mere food and refuge. 

                              It was a day of Hope at its Zenith, 
                            It was a day of unprecedented Grief! 



Notes: On August 15, 1947, the Indian Independence Bill took effect. The    Partition of India of 1947 was the division of British India into two dominion   states, India and Pakistan. The partition displaced between 10 - 12 million people.  (source: Wikipedia). 

                                        September 20, 2020
                                    For A Historic Event Contest 
                                       Sponsor: William Kekaula

                          For "Z" Old Or New Poem - Poetry Contest
                                     Sponsor: Constance La France
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La France Avatar
December 11, 2021 at 3:01 PM
Mala, congratulations on your Third Place win in my "Z" Contest, your poem is wonderful ~ love and serenity _ Constance
Goldsmith Avatar
December 8, 2021 at 8:35 AM
WOW!!! Congratulations on your win. What a wonderful yet sad story/write. Thanks for your note on the bottom. Have a great/blessed day with your win...............
Kauffman Avatar
December 7, 2021 at 12:58 PM
Mala, I am so glad to see this winner again! I left a footprint in my memory with its deeply felt emotive words and stunning images telling the story of gain and loss. Congratulations on your win. Blessings and hugs dear friend.
Kauffman Avatar
September 28, 2020 at 3:19 PM
Triumph and tragedy masterfully entwined, Mala. Joy stunted by immeasurable sorrow. This one has left a footprint in my memory. So happy to see it a winner. Congratulations! All the best!
Ray Choudhury Avatar
September 28, 2020 at 4:29 PM
Thank you, Sam. This is a poem which will remain very close to my heart. This historical event touched the life of my family like many other families, and changed numerous lives for ever (perhaps for the better in the long run)! Love, Mala
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
September 24, 2020 at 6:51 PM
Substantial precision of a melancholic event, Malabika, blessings my friend on your honorable placement, Aloha! William
Ray Choudhury Avatar
September 25, 2020 at 5:10 AM
Thank you, William. Your theme gave me an opportunity to talk about the tragic event which haunted a lot of people I had encountered. Thanks for the honourable placement.
Brul Avatar
September 20, 2020 at 7:04 PM
What could be more heart-piercing than this? "Leave their priceless memories, for ever, To begin life in a foreign land they had never known. " You got a patriotic soul, dear Mala. This poem carves a very special place in my heart. I wish this could be longer..I want to read more..... What can I say more? Goodluck for the win...
Ray Choudhury Avatar
September 21, 2020 at 4:33 AM
Thank you, JCB. This was truly a tragic, heart-piercing event, imprinted in the minds of the survivors and their families. Really appreciate your thoughtful comments. Love, Mala
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