Hope

You see hope when two kids share marbles between a volatile border.


Date: 16/06/2017

childrenconflictfuturehumanityinnocencemonoku

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Gregory Richard Barden

October 10, 2017 at 12:53 AM

Amen - blessings and congratulations on your win, my friend! :-)

Teddy Kimathi

October 17, 2017 at 4:35 AM

Thank you for your warm applause, Gregory! :-) Be Blessed!

Eve Roper

October 9, 2017 at 8:03 PM

Congratulations on your win, Teddy. Hugs Eve ~`*

Teddy Kimathi

October 17, 2017 at 4:34 AM

Thank you so much for your applause, Eve! *^_^* Be blessed!

Constance La France

October 9, 2017 at 2:26 PM

Teddy, congratulations on your win !

Teddy Kimathi

October 17, 2017 at 4:31 AM

Thank you so much, BW! I really appreciate it! *^_^*

Alexis Y.

October 9, 2017 at 7:40 AM

Wow! Teddy, I agree with this well written one-liner. When I read it, I instantly thought about the song " The Greatest Love Of All " by Whitney Houston. Congratulations on your 1st place win. I appreciate that you participated in the contest:-) Alexis

Teddy Kimathi

October 17, 2017 at 4:27 AM

Whitney Houston is one of my favorite singers of all time! Thank you so much Alexis, for your warm applause and enjoying my write! *^_^*

Kim Rodrigues

October 9, 2017 at 7:34 AM

Wow! Kids are our promise, usually torn only by their parents! Congrats, Teddy!

Teddy Kimathi

October 17, 2017 at 4:24 AM

You're right, Kim! Thank you so much for your kind applause! *^_^*

Sandy Tadros

August 23, 2017 at 6:00 PM

These words are so powerful!

Teddy Kimathi

August 27, 2017 at 6:48 AM

Thank you, Sandy! *^_^*

Jannie Breedt

July 8, 2017 at 1:13 PM

Lovely monoku Teddy well done.

Teddy Kimathi

July 9, 2017 at 5:15 AM

Thank you so much, Jannie! I really appreciate it! :-)

John Hamilton

July 2, 2017 at 5:46 PM

Belated congrats on POTD Teddy, hope sure is needed, sometimes children can teach us a lot!

Teddy Kimathi

July 5, 2017 at 3:48 PM

Thank you so much John, for your warm applause!! Lolest, it's never late to applaud anyone!! :D

Connie Marcum Wong

June 19, 2017 at 12:01 AM

What a vision this conjures Teddy! Congratulations on POTD of the day with this beauty,! ; )

Teddy Kimathi

June 20, 2017 at 4:31 AM

Thank you so much, Connie!! *^_^* Children are our hope in manifesting peace...

Joseph May

June 18, 2017 at 8:28 PM

Congrats on Poem of the Day Teddy

Teddy Kimathi

June 20, 2017 at 4:28 AM

Thank you so much, Joseph!! :-)

Heidi Sands

June 18, 2017 at 5:24 PM

Back to say Congratulations Teddy :)

Teddy Kimathi

June 20, 2017 at 4:26 AM

Thank you so much, Heidi. I really appreciate it!! *^_^*

Sara Ella

June 18, 2017 at 2:00 PM

Yes! This is truth! <3 Congratulations on this wonderful poem. :)

Teddy Kimathi

June 20, 2017 at 4:25 AM

Thank you so much for your kind applause, Sara!! *^_^*

Eileen Manassian

June 18, 2017 at 1:16 PM

Isn't that the truth. :) Congrats, dear. Lovely piece deserving of POTD.

Teddy Kimathi

June 20, 2017 at 4:23 AM

Hi Eileen. Thank you so much for your applause, and enjoying my line!! *^_^*

Daniel Turner

June 18, 2017 at 1:15 PM

A wonderful thought Teddy. Congratulations on POTD:)

Teddy Kimathi

June 20, 2017 at 4:21 AM

Greetings, Daniel. Thank you so much!! :-)

Darren White

June 18, 2017 at 12:24 PM

Wonderful PotD Teddy! COngratulations :)

Teddy Kimathi

June 18, 2017 at 12:28 PM

Thank you loads, Darren!! *^_^*

Akkina Downing

June 18, 2017 at 12:17 PM

Congrats Teddy on your great POTD. Keep hopes alive :) hugs

Teddy Kimathi

June 18, 2017 at 12:27 PM

Long live hope!! :) Thank you so much Akkina, for your kind applause!! *^_^*

Sunita U.D Palawon

June 18, 2017 at 8:40 AM

Conveys an important message. Hope the world ponder upon this. Well penned. :))

Teddy Kimathi

June 18, 2017 at 12:25 PM

I hope so too, Sunita. Thank you for reading and enjoying my monoku!! *^_^*

James Inman

June 18, 2017 at 8:28 AM

Beautiful Teddy

Teddy Kimathi

June 18, 2017 at 12:18 PM

Thank you so much, James!! ;-)

Charlie Smith

June 18, 2017 at 6:46 AM

Yes you do, congratulations Teddy on POTD honors...

Teddy Kimathi

June 18, 2017 at 12:16 PM

Thank you so much Charlie, for your kind applause!! ;-)

Agnes Krampe

June 18, 2017 at 6:35 AM

Congrats on POTD, Teddy. Beautiful thought.

Teddy Kimathi

June 18, 2017 at 12:15 PM

Thank you so much, Agnes!! *^_^*

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

June 18, 2017 at 6:26 AM

Brilliant and beautiful Monoku, a fave. Congratulations on potd! xomo

Teddy Kimathi

June 18, 2017 at 12:14 PM

Thank you so much, Maureen!! You're so kind!! *^_^*

Shreastha Vyas

June 18, 2017 at 6:03 AM

Really beautifully explain

Teddy Kimathi

June 18, 2017 at 12:12 PM

Thank you so much, Shreastha!! *^_^*

Lin Lane

June 18, 2017 at 6:02 AM

Recognition deserved so that many others may read your Hope, Teddy.

Teddy Kimathi

June 18, 2017 at 11:41 AM

Thank you so much, Lin!! You're too kind!! *^_^*

Teddy Kimathi

June 18, 2017 at 5:57 AM

A BIG thank you to TPS for featuring my work as the POEM OF THE DAY!!! :-)

Jan Allison

June 18, 2017 at 6:22 AM

BRAVO TO TPS!

Jan Allison

June 18, 2017 at 4:59 AM

WOOHOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO Many congrats Teddy I am absolutely delighted for you:-) hugs Jan xx

Teddy Kimathi

June 18, 2017 at 5:38 AM

I'm really speechless!!! Thank you so much Jan!!! I don't think it would be rated that highly, if it wasn't for you.... You're so kind!!! *^_^*

Hope

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