Home » Poems » Faye Gibson » Honeymoon Vacation

Honeymoon Vacation

Just a honeymoon beach vacation, a fine nuptial love celebration; we arrived a night early, we would find hotel surely: “No rooms” was the sad proclamation. “An hour away you might find one.” They were right for we only found…NONE!! We got off beaten path. too tired then to laugh, looked for a place “mom and pop” run. Well, it must have been close to midnight, exhausted the lady and her knight; we found Motel Warwick, a guest house illicit, and christened our honeymoon site. Copyright, July 13, 2014 Faye Lanham Gibson

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/29/2014 12:52:00 PM

Faye, Sweet smiles to you, sweet smiles to all.. Congratulations, on making Carolyn's Vacation Humor contest list. LOVE LINDA

Casarah Nance

Date: 7/27/2014 11:07:00 AM

Haha good poem Faye! great to see it on the winners list

Roy Jerden

Date: 7/27/2014 9:11:00 AM

Congratulations again! Cheers, Roy

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 7/27/2014 8:32:00 AM

Great humour Faye,, liked much,, trust was not a real life experience,, congrats on huge win!

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 7/27/2014 1:05:00 AM

Hilariously funny, Faye and congrats on the win

Joyce Johnson

Date: 7/26/2014 4:36:00 PM

Very funny. Congratulations. Love Joyce

Faye Gibson
Date: 7/26/2014 7:58:00 PM

Thank you, Joyce.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/26/2014 1:59:00 PM

WAY to GO, Faye. I remember this one and am glad to see you got a win. Congratulations.

Faye Gibson
Date: 7/26/2014 7:58:00 PM

Thanks, Andrea; not sure I really deserved it, but at least Carolyn got a laugh.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/26/2014 1:43:00 PM

Way to go with this great winning work..Congrats...Sara

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 7/26/2014 11:59:00 AM

Dear Faye, Your poem gave me a great laugh! The "Warwick" motel? Glad I didn't go there for my honeymoon. Syllable count was a bit off, but the poem was too funny not to place. Congrats on your win and thanks for participating in the contest. Love, Carolyn

Faye Gibson
Date: 7/26/2014 7:57:00 PM

Thank you, Carolyn. Yes, the Warwick Motel...we dubbed it Warwick Castle. Thanks for your generous placement of my poem; I have not written many limericks and need to work on that form more. Hope your vacation was lovely.