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Honey Bun

There was once a man from Thomaston
He called his wife honey bun
His knee joint went out
In pain he did shout
Viagra's  no longer number one

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 1/19/2011 1:24:00 PM
Many congrats on your win in Deborah's fine contest Sara....:)
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Date: 1/19/2011 12:17:00 PM
Sara, Congratulations on your success in Deb's contest! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 1/19/2011 6:21:00 AM
Congratulations Sara, on your HM in Deborah Guzzi's contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/19/2011 5:29:00 AM
giggle - congrats on the HM.
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Date: 1/18/2011 8:32:00 PM
I enjoyed this Viagra limerick, SAra. Congratulations on your win. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 1/18/2011 8:27:00 PM
hahaha.Many congratulations for this victory.
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Date: 1/18/2011 12:48:00 PM
Congrats Sara on your HM in the Limerick contest .. a great one my friend.. enjoy your special honor along with me..luv..
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Date: 1/18/2011 8:30:00 AM
Hi Sara - Congratulations on your win in Deborah's contest. Best wishes, KC
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Date: 1/17/2011 10:47:00 PM
Oh this is brilliant Sara, you are so prolific with your writing i cannot keep up with you to comment. but will strive to get there. Harry
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Date: 1/17/2011 9:23:00 PM
oh, just had to see this one on my way off. HOw CUTE!!
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Date: 1/17/2011 3:20:00 PM
Sara you could put "Viara's" that will get you 9 and the meter's still OK. Light & Love
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Date: 1/17/2011 7:57:00 AM
lol.. love it Sara,, good luck in the contest,..p.d.
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Date: 1/17/2011 1:33:00 AM
lol! Good one, Sara. Lainie
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Date: 1/16/2011 7:14:00 PM
This is a cute one. The title reminded me of the song from the Broadway musical "South Pacific".
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Date: 1/16/2011 11:51:00 AM
The word Thomaston was not in the rhyming dictionary so I had to use ton..I had to change this one for contest because it was not correct...Reposting the one that was herer..Sara
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Date: 1/16/2011 10:00:00 AM
Very funny, Sara!! Hope you entered this one in Deb's contest because it reads like a winner. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 1/16/2011 9:23:00 AM
What's causing you all the meter trouble is the 3 syllable words, very much harder to use them, only line 1 has the correct meter, Try starting with There once was/or/ There was a/ so you get going in the easiest most traditional way, keep trying you are not alone!! BIG HUGS
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Date: 1/16/2011 8:41:00 AM
Wow, Sara, this should be a winner in the contest! Fun and great humor! Enjuoyed, Gert
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Date: 1/16/2011 7:56:00 AM
The're off! Or do I miss the point of this funny "disjoint?" Love, Dave
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Date: 1/16/2011 7:46:00 AM
Sara, what a witty write, absolutely love it and thank you for the laughs this afternoon.. ;)
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Date: 1/16/2011 6:58:00 AM
i think your imagination is wild, but this is real humour
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Date: 1/16/2011 4:38:00 AM
Sara, I love it when you think outside of the box. We all have it in us. I just wish more and more writers would take it on. You gave me a chuckle with this one. Have a wonderful Sunday....:)
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Date: 1/16/2011 2:08:00 AM
A fun write to a fun form, a wicked sense of humor to go with it! Well done and thanks for your most welcome comments again. Anna-Marie.
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Date: 1/15/2011 11:05:00 PM
Great fun. So how is that Viagra stuff? hahaha. Wow, you saw that Irena movie. You be an interesting lady, Sara. Good luck in this contest. Luv, Andrea
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Date: 1/15/2011 9:46:00 PM
OH Sara this one is too cute and so very funny my friend.. good luck in the contest .. a great Limerick.. still smiling luv..
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