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Honey Bun

There was once a man from Thomaston
He called his wife honey bun
His knee joint went out
In pain he did shout
Viagra's  no longer number one

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James Fraser

January 19, 2011 at 1:24 PM

Many congrats on your win in Deborah's fine contest Sara....:)

Carolyn Devonshire

January 19, 2011 at 12:17 PM

Sara, Congratulations on your success in Deb's contest! Love, Carolyn

Carol Sunshine Brown

January 19, 2011 at 6:21 AM

Congratulations Sara, on your HM in Deborah Guzzi's contest. Love, Carol

Nick Bagnall

January 19, 2011 at 5:29 AM

giggle - congrats on the HM.

Andrea Dietrich

January 18, 2011 at 8:32 PM

I enjoyed this Viagra limerick, SAra. Congratulations on your win. LUv, Andrea

Tahera Mannan

January 18, 2011 at 8:27 PM

hahaha.Many congratulations for this victory.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

January 18, 2011 at 12:48 PM

Congrats Sara on your HM in the Limerick contest .. a great one my friend.. enjoy your special honor along with me..luv..

Kory Calhoun

January 18, 2011 at 8:30 AM

Hi Sara - Congratulations on your win in Deborah's contest. Best wishes, KC

Harry Horsman

January 17, 2011 at 10:47 PM

Oh this is brilliant Sara, you are so prolific with your writing i cannot keep up with you to comment. but will strive to get there. Harry

Andrea Dietrich

January 17, 2011 at 9:23 PM

oh, just had to see this one on my way off. HOw CUTE!!

Debbie Guzzi

January 17, 2011 at 3:20 PM

Sara you could put "Viara's" that will get you 9 and the meter's still OK. Light & Love

Poet Destroyer A

January 17, 2011 at 7:57 AM

lol.. love it Sara,, good luck in the contest,..p.d.

Elaine George

January 17, 2011 at 1:33 AM

lol! Good one, Sara. Lainie

Robert Pettit

January 16, 2011 at 7:14 PM

This is a cute one. The title reminded me of the song from the Broadway musical "South Pacific".

Sara Kendrick

January 16, 2011 at 11:51 AM

The word Thomaston was not in the rhyming dictionary so I had to use ton..I had to change this one for contest because it was not correct...Reposting the one that was herer..Sara

Carolyn Devonshire

January 16, 2011 at 10:00 AM

Very funny, Sara!! Hope you entered this one in Deb's contest because it reads like a winner. Love, Carolyn

Debbie Guzzi

January 16, 2011 at 9:23 AM

What's causing you all the meter trouble is the 3 syllable words, very much harder to use them, only line 1 has the correct meter, Try starting with There once was/or/ There was a/ so you get going in the easiest most traditional way, keep trying you are not alone!! BIG HUGS

Gert W. Knop

January 16, 2011 at 8:41 AM

Wow, Sara, this should be a winner in the contest! Fun and great humor! Enjuoyed, Gert

Daver Austin

January 16, 2011 at 7:56 AM

The're off! Or do I miss the point of this funny "disjoint?" Love, Dave

Wilma Neels

January 16, 2011 at 7:46 AM

Sara, what a witty write, absolutely love it and thank you for the laughs this afternoon.. ;)

Honesty Oimbo

January 16, 2011 at 6:58 AM

i think your imagination is wild, but this is real humour

James Fraser

January 16, 2011 at 4:38 AM

Sara, I love it when you think outside of the box. We all have it in us. I just wish more and more writers would take it on. You gave me a chuckle with this one. Have a wonderful Sunday....:)

Anna-Marie Docherty

January 16, 2011 at 2:08 AM

A fun write to a fun form, a wicked sense of humor to go with it! Well done and thanks for your most welcome comments again. Anna-Marie.

Andrea Dietrich

January 15, 2011 at 11:05 PM

Great fun. So how is that Viagra stuff? hahaha. Wow, you saw that Irena movie. You be an interesting lady, Sara. Good luck in this contest. Luv, Andrea