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* For Robert A. Heinlein *

Home Again

Beneath the yawning azure skies of Earth,
          We left our seed to wend the Sea of Suns,
               And prove the binding mettle of our worth,
     Beyond our violent need for war and guns.

We plunged an aching void of endless night,
          Through spinning rainbow nebulae of death,
               To wondrous planets multi-hued and bright,
     But none with Terra's sweet enchanting breath.

Ten thousand worlds of mystery, we found
          Grand vistas, picturesque, for us to roam,
               Yet, in the end, we turned our trek around, 
     Still yearning for those colors of our home.

To wade, again, the meadows of our birth ...
          Beneath the yawning azure skies of Earth.





~ 2nd Place ~  in the "Standard Contest 400, Any Rhymed Poem, Any Theme, A Minimum Of 2 To A Maximum Of 14 Lines" Poetry Contest, Brian Strand, Judge & Sponsor.

~ 7th Place ~  in the "Nature Scene Orphan Sonnet" Poetry Contest, Dale Gregory Cozart, Judge & Sponsor.
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Watt Avatar
January 2, 2020 at 12:35 AM
A delightful closed loop with lines 1 and 14. Really enjoy taking this fantasy trip and in my mind echoing Dorothy's words, "There's no place like home". I just re-watched the movie Interstellar and felt like I was in that movie as I read your poem! Favorite line - "To wade, again, the meadows of our birth". Great write!
Leiser Avatar
June 9, 2019 at 4:18 PM
Epic poem, Gregory, spanning the great horizons of the universe, no less! Congrats on your win! :)
Barden Avatar
June 27, 2019 at 10:40 PM
Many kind thanks to you, Laura, I so greatly appreciate your wonderful comment ... blessings, my friend! :o) <3
Marcum Wong Avatar
June 9, 2019 at 12:49 PM
I am so happy to see this favorite of mine make the winning list Greg! Hey very deserving congratulations! : ) xxoo
Barden Avatar
June 27, 2019 at 10:34 PM
You are so sweet, Connie, and even the bright, warm sun of Hawaii must have trouble out-shining you each day ... you are a gem, and will always be a favorite PS-er of mine. Many thanks and blessings, Dear Poet! :o) <3
Gondolf Avatar
June 9, 2019 at 11:54 AM
Congrats, Greg, enjoyed your fantasy trip but in the end there's nothing better than home sweet home. John
Barden Avatar
June 27, 2019 at 10:32 PM
Amen to that, John, and thank you SO much for the kind words, my friend! Blessings! :o)
Gauthier Avatar
June 9, 2019 at 11:37 AM
Awesome imagery, Gregory. Congrats on your well deserved win.
Barden Avatar
June 27, 2019 at 10:31 PM
Thank you so very much, Line! :o) <3
Cozart Avatar
June 9, 2019 at 11:26 AM
Congratulations on your 7th Place win! This was a VERY tough contest to judge. Thank you so much for taking the time to enter.
Barden Avatar
June 27, 2019 at 10:31 PM
Many kind thanks to you, Dale, I am honored to have placed so highly among such amazing poems! Blessings, my friend! :o) (I kept the Italics off, lol ... not sure why I have gotten so addicted to that, though I think it's just a visual thing, it seems to flow more).
Barry-Nishanian Avatar
June 3, 2019 at 7:55 PM
Congrats! I'm never surprised when you win. Wonderful as always.
Barden Avatar
June 27, 2019 at 10:29 PM
Thank you so much, Barbara, you are always kind! :o) <3
Marcum Wong Avatar
June 1, 2019 at 5:33 PM
" But none with Terra's sweet enchanting breath." Simply stunning Greg! This Poem deserves its high placement. It is written brilliantly and going into my faves! Congratulations on your wonderful win! : ) xxoo
Barden Avatar
June 1, 2019 at 8:47 PM
This is a wonderful comment, Connie, and I thank you so much ... I love to write in this genre, but it's not exactly the favorite one here, so it means a lot when I get such positive feedback on these sci-fi pieces. Blessings to you, Dear Friend! :-) <3
Onclaud Avatar
June 1, 2019 at 3:54 PM
a multiverse beyond our milky always awe s me, gregory... fascinating write worthy of POTD.... huggs and soupie!
Barden Avatar
June 1, 2019 at 8:44 PM
Thank you very much, Nette, that's such a nice comment, and I greatly appreciate it. Blessings, my friend! :-) <3
Watson Avatar
June 1, 2019 at 3:17 PM
This flowed so beautifully,Greg and conjured up some wonderful images. Congratulations on your great win.
Barden Avatar
June 1, 2019 at 8:43 PM
Thanks so much, Wendy, I'm so pleased you like this one! Blessings! :-) <3
Hamilton Avatar
May 31, 2019 at 10:18 AM
Wondrous is the universe but as Dorothy said there's no place like home, enjoyed thoroughly G!
Barden Avatar
May 31, 2019 at 2:51 PM
Thanks so much, John, that's very kind my friend ... I know this genre isn't popular here, but I love it! Blessings, Bud! :-)
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