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* For Robert A. Heinlein *

Beneath the yawning azure skies of Earth, We left our seed to wend the Sea of Suns, And prove the binding mettle of our worth, Beyond our violent need for war and guns. We plunged an aching void of endless night, Through spinning rainbow nebulae of death, To wondrous planets multi-hued and bright, But none with Terra's sweet enchanting breath. Ten thousand worlds of mystery, we found Grand vistas, picturesque, for us to roam, Yet, in the end, we turned our trek around, Still yearning for those colors of our home. To wade, again, the meadows of our birth ... Beneath the yawning azure skies of Earth. ~ 2nd Place ~ in the "Standard Contest 400, Any Rhymed Poem, Any Theme, A Minimum Of 2 To A Maximum Of 14 Lines" Poetry Contest, Brian Strand, Judge & Sponsor. ~ 7th Place ~ in the "Nature Scene Orphan Sonnet" Poetry Contest, Dale Gregory Cozart, Judge & Sponsor.

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Date: 1/2/2020 12:35:00 AM
A delightful closed loop with lines 1 and 14. Really enjoy taking this fantasy trip and in my mind echoing Dorothy's words, "There's no place like home". I just re-watched the movie Interstellar and felt like I was in that movie as I read your poem! Favorite line - "To wade, again, the meadows of our birth". Great write!
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Date: 6/9/2019 4:18:00 PM
Epic poem, Gregory, spanning the great horizons of the universe, no less! Congrats on your win! :)
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 6/27/2019 10:40:00 PM
Many kind thanks to you, Laura, I so greatly appreciate your wonderful comment ... blessings, my friend! :o) <3
Date: 6/9/2019 12:49:00 PM
I am so happy to see this favorite of mine make the winning list Greg! Hey very deserving congratulations! : ) xxoo
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 6/27/2019 10:34:00 PM
You are so sweet, Connie, and even the bright, warm sun of Hawaii must have trouble out-shining you each day ... you are a gem, and will always be a favorite PS-er of mine. Many thanks and blessings, Dear Poet! :o) <3
Date: 6/9/2019 11:54:00 AM
Congrats, Greg, enjoyed your fantasy trip but in the end there's nothing better than home sweet home. John
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 6/27/2019 10:32:00 PM
Amen to that, John, and thank you SO much for the kind words, my friend! Blessings! :o)
Date: 6/9/2019 11:37:00 AM
Awesome imagery, Gregory. Congrats on your well deserved win.
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 6/27/2019 10:31:00 PM
Thank you so very much, Line! :o) <3
Date: 6/9/2019 11:26:00 AM
Congratulations on your 7th Place win! This was a VERY tough contest to judge. Thank you so much for taking the time to enter.
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 6/27/2019 10:31:00 PM
Many kind thanks to you, Dale, I am honored to have placed so highly among such amazing poems! Blessings, my friend! :o) (I kept the Italics off, lol ... not sure why I have gotten so addicted to that, though I think it's just a visual thing, it seems to flow more).
Date: 6/3/2019 7:55:00 PM
Congrats! I'm never surprised when you win. Wonderful as always.
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 6/27/2019 10:29:00 PM
Thank you so much, Barbara, you are always kind! :o) <3
Date: 6/1/2019 5:33:00 PM
" But none with Terra's sweet enchanting breath." Simply stunning Greg! This Poem deserves its high placement. It is written brilliantly and going into my faves! Congratulations on your wonderful win! : ) xxoo
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 6/1/2019 8:47:00 PM
This is a wonderful comment, Connie, and I thank you so much ... I love to write in this genre, but it's not exactly the favorite one here, so it means a lot when I get such positive feedback on these sci-fi pieces. Blessings to you, Dear Friend! :-) <3
Date: 6/1/2019 3:54:00 PM
a multiverse beyond our milky always awe s me, gregory... fascinating write worthy of POTD.... huggs and soupie!
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 6/1/2019 8:44:00 PM
Thank you very much, Nette, that's such a nice comment, and I greatly appreciate it. Blessings, my friend! :-) <3
Date: 6/1/2019 3:17:00 PM
This flowed so beautifully,Greg and conjured up some wonderful images. Congratulations on your great win.
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 6/1/2019 8:43:00 PM
Thanks so much, Wendy, I'm so pleased you like this one! Blessings! :-) <3
Date: 5/31/2019 10:18:00 AM
Wondrous is the universe but as Dorothy said there's no place like home, enjoyed thoroughly G!
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 5/31/2019 2:51:00 PM
Thanks so much, John, that's very kind my friend ... I know this genre isn't popular here, but I love it! Blessings, Bud! :-)

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