Hole in One

Golf loving Paddy from sunny Glambole
was truly a gentle fun-loving soul
but he was a big bloke,
he took a well-aimed stroke
Sara the caddy yelled "wrong hole, wrong hole”
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Crandall Avatar
September 15, 2026 at 7:38 PM
Haha, congratulations on this tale of a fun-loving golfer and his innocent mistake!
Borg Avatar
September 23, 2026 at 12:17 PM
David, did you say innocent?
George Avatar
September 13, 2026 at 10:56 PM
Back to your interesting poem with Congratulations on your first place win.
Borg Avatar
September 14, 2026 at 2:57 AM
Valsa, thank you so much for your re-visit. I'll try my best to send more chuckles your way.
Dietrich Avatar
September 13, 2026 at 9:47 PM
Well done, Pascal. Big congrats 👏
Borg Avatar
September 14, 2026 at 2:58 AM
Thank you Andrea.
Kitchin Avatar
September 13, 2026 at 1:02 PM
Pascal, this is cute and fun, congratulations on your first place win. 🏆
Borg Avatar
September 13, 2026 at 2:43 PM
Thank you, Tania. Perhaps not fully understood by all who read it. Your competition was great fun; looking forward to the next.
George Avatar
September 6, 2026 at 8:28 PM
This is quite interesting, especially to lovers of golf. This limerick flows smoothly. After all aiming, if the ball lands in a wrong hole, it is so disappointing. Thanks dear Pascal for your visit to my page.
Borg Avatar
September 6, 2026 at 8:51 PM
Likewise, thank you Valsa.
Lane Avatar
September 6, 2026 at 6:52 PM
Oh my! He may be needing a new caddy! 😊
Borg Avatar
September 6, 2026 at 8:24 PM
A bit risque!
Kendrick Avatar
September 6, 2026 at 4:56 PM
Subtle tone and humor, Pascal. Sad that Paddy was like wrong way Hosea. Thank you for sharing this one with us. Way to go. 👏✍️. Sara K.
Borg Avatar
September 6, 2026 at 8:21 PM
Pleased to please.
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