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Holding On

la vapeur monte, mon désir A breeze brushes lightly across bare eyes longing pools of desire penetrate deep into the cradle that is you and I crave to delve Waters drip dewing at a touch caressing the morning air engulfed in passion's first kiss My lair awaits the Ravens call to dissipate with nature's scent knocking high upon your window Hope rests in the middle the church bells ring my world keeps spinning and I'm holding on  • to you

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Date: 10/4/2017 8:32:00 PM
J'aime ça aussi, very romantic, loved the last verse.
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Date: 10/4/2017 10:43:00 AM
So romantic! J'aime ça!
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Date: 10/3/2017 7:43:00 PM
A beautiful and sensual write Tim. Lush lines like; 'deep into the cradle that is you and I crave to delve' - those are some sweet poetic words Tim. I truly enjoyed your poem this evening!
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Date: 10/3/2017 6:35:00 PM
Wonderful, romantic poem Tim <3 brings a smile to the end of my day :)
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Date: 10/3/2017 6:11:00 PM
I could enjoy holding on to that kind of desire. A grand romance poem, Tim.
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Date: 10/3/2017 2:20:00 PM
Beautiful poem, Tim ... beauty and passion hand in hand - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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