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Hold On Tight

A gansta guy wearing his pants way low Kept his hands on his crotch and walked real slow Lost his grip Down they slipped Of junk in his trunk ,not much of a show 6/26/13

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Carrie Richards

Date: 7/22/2013 9:33:00 AM

You have such a winner here!! LMAO !!! Kuddos Barb !!!

Roy Jerden

Date: 7/22/2013 6:13:00 AM

Congratulations on your win! Cheers, Roy

Russell Smith

Date: 7/21/2013 4:12:00 PM

So true. congrats on this very funny winner! Russell

Joseph May

Date: 7/21/2013 6:17:00 AM

congrats on a great win Barbara

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 7/21/2013 2:47:00 AM

Bg Fantastic congrats on win Shadow x smiles (7)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/21/2013 1:21:00 AM

hahaha, What did I tell you? I knew Heather would love this one,. and congratulations.

Eileen Manassian

Date: 7/20/2013 11:17:00 PM

Congrats on your winning place!!! Had a good chuckle! Very good write! hugs!

Karen Anglesey

Date: 7/20/2013 8:59:00 PM

Barbara, this is very clever. Love the funny images of the 'gangsta' Congratulations on your win :)

Skat A

Date: 7/20/2013 8:12:00 PM

A good one. Congratulations! with the smiles. LUV ~SKAT~

Tim Ryerson

Date: 7/20/2013 7:43:00 PM

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Tim Ryerson
Date: 7/20/2013 7:47:00 PM