Hold On Tight

A gansta guy wearing his pants way low Kept his hands on his crotch and walked real slow Lost his grip Down they slipped Of junk in his trunk ,not much of a show
6/26/13
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Richards Avatar
July 22, 2013 at 9:33 AM
You have such a winner here!! LMAO !!! Kuddos Barb !!!
Jerden Avatar
July 22, 2013 at 6:13 AM
Congratulations on your win! Cheers, Roy
Smith Avatar
July 21, 2013 at 4:12 PM
So true. congrats on this very funny winner! Russell
May Avatar
July 21, 2013 at 6:17 AM
congrats on a great win Barbara
Hamilton Avatar
July 21, 2013 at 2:47 AM
Bg Fantastic congrats on win Shadow x smiles (7)
Dietrich Avatar
July 21, 2013 at 1:21 AM
hahaha, What did I tell you? I knew Heather would love this one,. and congratulations.
Manassian Avatar
July 20, 2013 at 11:17 PM
Congrats on your winning place!!! Had a good chuckle! Very good write! hugs!
Anglesey Avatar
July 20, 2013 at 8:59 PM
Barbara, this is very clever. Love the funny images of the 'gangsta' Congratulations on your win :)
A  Avatar
July 20, 2013 at 8:12 PM
A good one. Congratulations! with the smiles. LUV ~SKAT~
Ryerson Avatar
July 20, 2013 at 7:43 PM
Go for it!.......'Send your submission by email to [email protected]. Send the submission in the body of the email, stating what it is (fiction, academia, etc.). Layout of a piece may alter in the body of an email, but if we consider the piece for publication, we will eventually see the your work in correct form. A submission without 'H&H Submission' in the regards box will not be accepted' -We Do Not Open Attachments-
Ryerson Avatar
July 20, 2013 at 7:47 PM
They have agreed to publish two of mine...I think they prefer funny, off-beat, quirky stuff...This mag is taylor made for you
Ryerson Avatar
July 20, 2013 at 7:41 PM
My tummy is sore and it's all your fault...
Martin Avatar
July 20, 2013 at 7:21 PM
Funny stuff!!! Congrats on your win....Jim
Ober Avatar
July 20, 2013 at 7:02 PM
Barbara, this made me guffaw. Seriously. AWESOME job! Congrats on your win in my contest :)
Posey Avatar
July 2, 2013 at 5:49 PM
Hmmmm, I didn't even know anyone was watching... This is so embarrassing .... Jake
Pettit Avatar
June 28, 2013 at 9:52 AM
That was an embarrassing situation for this guy. You have described it well here.
Sirak Avatar
June 28, 2013 at 8:04 AM
Great! Very funny
Dietrich Avatar
June 28, 2013 at 1:44 AM
hahahahaha. THIS should score BIG with her if it's for Heather. It scores with ME.
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