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Hold Me In Your Arms

Hold me in your arms; don’t let go. I beg you, Dear, please keep in mind the vows we made so long ago when love was fresh yet also blind! You said forever we’d stay strong. Hold me in your arms; don’t let go. To break our bond would be so wrong when all these years I’ve loved you so! You can’t deny that even though we’ve made mistakes, I have stayed true. Hold me in your arms; don’t let go. It’s the only thing I ask of you! Your beating heart I need to feel against me, Dear. You have to know love cannot die when it is real. Hold me in your arms. Don’t let go! Sept. 18, 2017 for Julie Rodeheaver's "Hold Me In Your Arms' Contest

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Date: 12/10/2017 6:32:00 PM
Wow, Andrea, what a beautiful, romantic quatern; and I see it was a winner, as most of yours are :) Congrats. John
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Date: 9/19/2017 6:22:00 PM
Back to congratulate you Eve ~`*
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Date: 9/19/2017 12:25:00 PM
A lovely poem ... The underlying melody is nice ... Congratulations, Andrea ...
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Date: 9/19/2017 11:57:00 AM
congratulations, Andrea
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Date: 9/19/2017 11:11:00 AM
So beautifully written! CONGRATULATIONS
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Date: 9/19/2017 6:33:00 AM
Congrats Andrea!
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Date: 9/18/2017 11:21:00 PM
Congratulations, Andrea. What a lovely love poem!
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Date: 9/18/2017 11:15:00 PM
Very personal and with just the right passion. Congratulations Andrea on your win...
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Date: 9/18/2017 5:44:00 PM
Beautiful poem, and I love how you pulled off the quatern form. Good luck in the contest.
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Date: 9/18/2017 5:21:00 PM
this is just beautiful, andrea! very touching...
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Date: 9/18/2017 4:25:00 PM
Wonderful, Andrea, luck in the contest Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 9/18/2017 4:02:00 PM
Lovely tribute to love--love the emotional urging and invitation--best wishes for a win, Andrea!
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Date: 9/18/2017 3:41:00 PM
lovely and romantic Andrea and despite having ups and downs its good to see a relationship continue to grow:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 9/18/2017 3:39:00 PM
Lovely poem Andrea..
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Date: 9/18/2017 3:27:00 PM
It is good to know that love can last...best of luck
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