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His Love

It was a loud silent day Magically gray and very fair I took his hand and kissed his lips In his arms the turning stilled His warm breath held me captive Freeing the inner beast in my heart He circled it with pure joy and pain My silent screams and endless agony He felt it within his soul’s body The tiny ray of light parting the dark cloud Wrapped me in comfort Of pretty love and prettier hate This fear of hope and ice in heat Only his love and desire can curb Within his circle of love I live To die and forever be immortal

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 4/1/2013 4:23:00 AM
Some of your phrases are interesting- loud silent day,soul's body, ice in heat...congrats on the win with this poem which has for good measure everything like kiss, screams, beast, hope ,love:) Jag
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Date: 3/31/2013 4:19:00 PM
A poem full of descriptive imagery. Congrats on your win, Tahera! Love, Kim
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Date: 3/31/2013 11:28:00 AM
Congrats, Tahera. Well done. Nice going. hugs, Ralph
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Date: 3/30/2013 10:57:00 PM
Tahera, congratulations with your awesome love poem.... rendering the best part of life~ always*LINDA
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Tahera Mannan
Date: 3/31/2013 10:45:00 PM
Thanks for my placement Linda. It always means a lot to place in your contests.
Date: 1/17/2011 11:40:00 AM
I am stopping by today to thank you for your kind comments Tahera. It is always a pleasure to read your wonderful poetry. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/16/2011 7:31:00 AM
like i'm in a rhapsody of love circling with your beautiful lines and expressions... if for a contest, i wish you winning luck, tahera! :) huggs, nette
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Date: 1/15/2011 8:47:00 AM
Hope you've entered this one in the oxymoronic contest, Tahera! Great use of the oxymorons throughout and a terrific description of a loving relationship. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 1/15/2011 8:20:00 AM
Vow,beautiful!Lovely love,Tahera.I really enjoyed it.Thanks for congrats.The same to you too.
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Date: 1/15/2011 7:44:00 AM
amazing poem that highlights love and its nuances-- wonderful oxymorons you've included here-- I wish you the best in the contest :) -- nikko :)
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Date: 1/14/2011 9:47:00 PM
A wonderful poem Tahera Mannan, full of must love' (lin~ra)
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Date: 1/14/2011 9:13:00 PM
There are a few paradoxes in your wording, but everything combines for great descriptiveness. Good entry.
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