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November-19- 2024
Hindsight 20- 20 Poetry Contest
Sponsor- Crystol Woods

 

Once I shared a long hidden secret with the one, I thought was my friend, through and through. But little did I think it would hit back on me Like a boomerang, breaking my heart. She betrayed my trust with my reputation at stake. Within days, it became a juicy gossip, A fodder for many to ruminate and cud. What was ‘whispered in the ear was shouted from roof tops’! Behind my back, many used it against me. With them, my secret became a sharp tool. They used it at will to cut and bruise me. I lost my sleep and reacted brashly. It became a wound that began festering. I longed for a release from my pent- up wrath. I wondered if I could glue up the broken shards, And become whole again, my former self. It took a long time, to come out of the resentment. But with the passing of time, the pain began to fade And the heart once broken slowly started to mend Not to have a repeat, decided to set my boundaries marked. That bitter experience taught me some vital lessons, Which I won't ever forget in life. My hindsight told me that I should change, In some areas where I am most vulnerable. Learned the hard way to be more cautious To guard my secrets and never spill the beans! Also not to venture to be all open before others. Never again shall I struggle to fit in With a loose tongue, in any company Just to entertain others with frivolous talks! I am also careful not to rashly blurt out my feelings. How I wish to become more prudent and discerning In choosing friends and trusting them! I also resolve to always keep my calm, Even when I know my words are misinterpreted. Looking back on all that has happened in life, I don't think I have many regrets. All my experiences, good or bad have been signposts, That led me to where I am and who I am today. Still there are some things I wish I hadn’t said at all.

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Date: 11/30/2024 1:08:00 PM
Oh Valsa, how very sad. I'm so sorry you were Betrayed by a so called friend. Being choosy with who you let your guard down with makes good sense, but i do hope you are able to trust of it is earned. The hurt of betrayal is all consuming but the joy in true friendship is worth the risk! Ty for sharing your story with us! Xoxo
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Date: 11/29/2024 6:51:00 PM
A raw honest write I learned from! I have trusted when I shouldn’t have! And in my writing I wear my heart on my sleeve. Congratulations dear Valsa on your win in the contest!
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Date: 11/19/2024 4:45:00 PM
so true, life teach who are the good and the bad people, life is a permanent construction, a poem that touched me thanks poet valsa
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Date: 11/19/2024 3:53:00 PM
A very good story for this particular contest. Thankfully I have never done anything juicy enough for people to hurt me by my revealing it because, believe me, I am so full of TMI. I just need to stop boring people with all my stories I am always telling. I think you learned very well from this betrayal
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Date: 11/19/2024 10:07:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your powerful write. A friend hurting a friend is so very bad. Guess we all have been there. Even the Lord was betrayed. It is all so very sad. I had a friend that would say, tell me & I will Not tell. Another friend told her something. When he found out she was telling everyone. He killed himself. True Story... Have a blessed day writing away...............
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Date: 11/19/2024 10:01:00 AM
Betrayal is hard to bear, but we must learn to forgive and forget. No doubt you have to be wary of anyone who betrays. Secrets are not supposed to be divulged. Yet we are human, and so we must learn a difficult situation. It is a worthwhile poem that teaches us a great lesson. Best for a win, dear Valsa.
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Date: 11/19/2024 8:20:00 AM
Valsa you are not alone my Dear. We have all experienced betrayal. It brings emotional distraught and an enemy in the end. Even our Lord was betrayed by his people and Judas. How painful was that? Like you said it makes you realize that you cannot trust everyone no matter how close. Remember one thing vengeance is his saith the Lord. That individual that betrayed you will get it back in their lifetime, no vicious act goes unpunished. You have written a truth that many that read will be reminded
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Date: 11/19/2024 8:23:00 AM
of their own personal betrayals. Forgiveness is so hard to do but when done releases the festering and hate build for that individual who betrays. I hope you have recovered and learned a valuable lesson in life. Those things that can hurt you are better kept inside and never shared... God bless you and this was an incredible write that I am favoring because it reminds me of what never to do... Fav. Thanks for sharing and God bless you...

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