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we offered our hearts eagerly sketched in wet sand.... entwined initials whispered in the wind promises too young to keep… first kiss at sunset a chill from the sea… such fragile love would vanish in a wave of tears ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- For Linda Marie's "Sentimental Senryu" contest

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Date: 2/24/2011 10:32:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in Linda-Marie's contest "Special Sentimental Senryu". Long list of winners so glad to see your name among them Carrie. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/18/2011 7:47:00 AM
absolutely magical, congrats, great writing Déirdre
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Date: 2/18/2011 4:39:00 AM
WOW, Carrie one we all can relate too.. A great win for you my dear...I loved it...always Michael
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Date: 2/17/2011 11:50:00 PM
Many Congrats Carrie for top notch position in Linda's contest thru' this creative piece. Luv & Best wishes - Hitendra Mehta
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Date: 2/17/2011 4:13:00 PM
Aww this one is awesome Carrie! Congratulations to you. Didn't you just hit those fragile years on the button!
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Date: 2/17/2011 1:50:00 PM
LOVELY, Carrie. A big congratulations to you. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 2/17/2011 10:12:00 AM
Congrats on your 1st place win in the contest....Jimmy
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Date: 2/17/2011 10:12:00 AM
Carrie, congratulations on your first place win in Linda's contest, love Wilma
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Date: 2/17/2011 10:05:00 AM
Very beautiful Senryu.Congrats Carrie on your 1st place win----kashinath
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Date: 2/17/2011 9:24:00 AM
Hello Carrie, Congratulations on your number 1 Win, this is so very passionate and beautiful.... I can remember a love such as this. Lov, Shar
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Date: 2/17/2011 9:04:00 AM
Yes, first love is always tough, but we survive : ) Congratulations on your Fantastic Ist Place win, Carrie. This is beautiful and nostalgic. Love, Annalise
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Date: 2/17/2011 5:04:00 AM
A MASTERPIECE!! To my fav's, dear Carrie. Lainie
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Date: 2/17/2011 4:25:00 AM
Astonishing and amazing... deserve first place... Congrats! Love, Sami
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Date: 2/16/2011 8:41:00 PM
those younger years say so much CHEERS for the super win, carrie! :) huggs, nette
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Date: 2/16/2011 7:43:00 PM
Beautiful and sad. Many congrats for this huge win.
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Date: 2/16/2011 6:44:00 PM
Sweet, none the less, hun Carrie! Congratulations on your first place hit. Agape, Moses
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Date: 2/16/2011 5:49:00 PM
Carrie, congratulations on winning first place in this contest. With these three finely written senryu poems, you deserved to win.
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Date: 2/16/2011 5:39:00 PM
Congratulations on the first place win in the contest of Linda, Carrie
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Date: 2/16/2011 5:18:00 PM
Congrats Carrie on your first place win in my contest .. thankxx for your support luv..
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Date: 2/2/2011 2:46:00 PM
Absolutely outstanding, dear Carrie. Lainie
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Date: 2/2/2011 6:04:00 AM
thankxx for supporting my current contest Carrie .. good luck... will read fully as judging time draws closer luv..appreciate ...
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Date: 2/1/2011 11:59:00 PM
Brings back sweet and sad memories of youth..Best of luck..love,Deb
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Date: 2/1/2011 10:15:00 PM
romance lights up with such rich imagery, carrie... best of winning wishes to you..:) huggs, nette
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