High Noon For Ruth

It came to pass that in Bethlehem, Judah
God sent a famine with problems most  severe.
Mother  Naomi and her three men maneuver
to strike out in sync, to leave their home sphere.
Death by starvation was, of course, their main fear.

It came to pass that in Moab, fate won their heart.
Naomi’s two sons took on wives fairly soon.
But, Death by disease broke this family apart;
all three husbands were struck by its sudden harpoon.
One young wife named Ruth had met her high noon.
 
It came to pass that three women in limbo
made the choice of their lives, likely unhurried.
Our hero, Ruth,  the poet, put things in tempo -
“Entreat me not to leave you,”  Ruth was worried
for Naomi.  “Where you die, I will be buried.”

It has come to pass that over time,  well-known phrase,
“Entreat me not to leave you,” which Ruth composed
has become a mantra for those put face to face.
May it never lose the proviso Ruth proposed -
“Your God, my God!” a standard upheld,  unopposed.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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March 23, 2014 at 1:01 AM
a lovely poem Reason..... Linda
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March 22, 2014 at 3:58 PM
Reason, This is a nice entry in "Isaiah Z's RUTH contest." congratulations on your win. LOVE ~SKAT~
Kendrick Avatar
March 21, 2014 at 6:02 PM
Very great work telling the story of Ruth and Naomi..Way to go with your winning work..Sara
Zerbst Avatar
March 21, 2014 at 1:23 PM
Excellent storytelling that covers the first two chapters. I really do like this poem and how it ends with a focus on Ruth's words, something that is unique to this poem; so a little more polish to make it flow naturally and sequentially would have made it place quite a bit higher.
Johnson Avatar
March 21, 2014 at 10:47 AM
Well told story of Ruth. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
Gasun Avatar
March 21, 2014 at 6:14 AM
My hearty congratulations on your great write and win my dear friend Reason. TYSM for sharing as well! love lots and hugs, Leonora
Poteet Avatar
March 21, 2014 at 7:12 AM
thanks, Leonora, I welcome your support and encouragement here at PS. I will be gone for the month of April, but I'll be back.
Mehta Avatar
March 21, 2014 at 5:19 AM
Nice presentation on the honesty and devotion on Ruth.. Congrats on a fine win, reason
Poteet Avatar
March 21, 2014 at 7:16 AM
Thank you, Dr. Ram...one of my favorite Bible characters needless to say.
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March 21, 2014 at 2:02 AM
Well done Reason & congratulations on your win...Verlena
Poteet Avatar
March 3, 2014 at 12:04 PM
thank you, Dave, I appreciate the compliment. I just read it and let it speak to my heart. Consider it done, the entering of the contest. PS: My real name is Ruth Tried to do this as a reply and PS gnomes wouldn't let me.
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