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High In Winter Trees

Our meadow has always held surprises. After we moved in - that first spring - a myriad of daffodils appeared from dormant bulbs, exactly where I had decided my fairy garden would be.  Like a beautiful stage play the seasons transitioned. After summer showers, gigantic fungi grew overnight in perfect symmetry, like shells, layered on the old oak stump.   - now, into blazing colors of Autumn against  an unreal blue sky, leaves floated like lost butterflies. Finally, bare trees revealed large stick nests that all along, I assumed to be ravens’. Cozy shelters against the winter freeze. 


High in winter trees,
Stick nests become visible 
who would guess-squirrels.



Leaf Nests – These constructions are found at least 20 feet up in a tree. Leaf nests are usually tucked in the fork of a large tree branch, which adds stability. You can tell them apart from bird nests because they are noticeably larger than a typical bird nest.
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Cantu Avatar
May 24, 2023 at 3:59 PM
I love it. You have such a gift for sharing the glories of nature.
Gasun Avatar
May 6, 2023 at 7:49 PM
Such a spectacular haibun my dear poet friend Suz. I enjoyed the panoramic view of high in winter trees which you've skillfully portrayed showing the astounding creation of God. I love it a lot. Thank you so much for sharing. God bless you always and your writings. Hugs
Baker Avatar
May 5, 2023 at 9:35 PM
One of my favorite forms of poetry, SuZ, thanks for sharing your love of nature and your thoughts on nest building for birds or squirrels. Very informative in poetic form. Write On my friend! Bill
Allison Avatar
May 1, 2023 at 9:09 AM
what a delightful haibun - we do not have any squirrels on our island which made the vivid descriptive imagery even more of a joy to read for me:-) hugs Jan xx
Delaney Avatar
May 1, 2023 at 11:50 AM
Thank you, Jan: We do have quite a few resident squirrels and they really are cute with their little antics. Thanks for your visit and good to see you around again. Hugs and here’s hoping your funny- bone kicks the Muse awake LOL SuZ
Callus Avatar
April 29, 2023 at 11:56 AM
I have a feeling this Haibun is based on real life experiences, Suz! So those nests turned out to be squirrels' dreys! I would not have known had you not spilt the beans :) ~ Enjoy the rest of the weekend, my friend // paul
Delaney Avatar
May 1, 2023 at 11:46 AM
Hi Paul: Yes….this is a re-write of one I did a couple of years. I had removed it from the Soup but I revised it and reposted. It was a surprise to me to find that squirrels build a nest. Always something new to learn. Have a good week. SuZ
Sietesantos Avatar
April 29, 2023 at 8:45 AM
Awwww - such a lovely Haibun - awesome imagery! Hugs. Pandita
Delaney Avatar
April 29, 2023 at 10:30 AM
Hi Pandita: Glad you enjoyed. Nature always has secrets to reveal. Thanks for your kind words, SuZ
Kauffman Avatar
April 27, 2023 at 10:59 AM
One of the blessings of the trees losing their leaves is we get to see the bird's nests -marvels of architectural design! Thank you for this wonderful viewpoint! Blessings!
Delaney Avatar
April 28, 2023 at 12:04 PM
Thanks so much, Sam: soon summer will be back to hide them from view. Blessings, SuZ
Radice Avatar
April 27, 2023 at 7:11 AM
We have a drey a few trees down from our garden. They're usually found in the fork of a thick branch from the tree trunk. They weave the twigs somehow. nature amazes..as does your haibun Suz. :) Cheers - Gary
Delaney Avatar
April 28, 2023 at 12:03 PM
Hi Gary: I sure appreciate knowing what they are called. I now have an image in my mind of a grey squirrel in his drey. Yes, nature is fascinating. Cheers<~> SuZ
Lane Avatar
April 27, 2023 at 6:50 AM
That's a really big nest. Looks a titch bedraggled but I'm sure it's well-built. A very nice job of Haibunning, Suz.
Delaney Avatar
April 28, 2023 at 11:59 AM
Thanks Lin: I appreciate your stopping by to read and comment. <~> SuZ
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