Hiding

Under the duvet, We'll hide from the winter's chill Making our own warmth.

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James Fraser

Date: 10/24/2010 4:00:00 PM

After reading this, I'm going to stand outside for 5 minutes as it's quite chilly here in Inverness. It should cool me down. Just lovely Francine >> James

Lou Schreiberg

Date: 10/23/2010 11:49:00 AM

What a pleasant thought!...Nice write

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 10/23/2010 10:22:00 AM

Nice thought with nice images, Francine

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 10/23/2010 6:50:00 AM

Great idea..Im going back to bed..BG

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 10/23/2010 6:23:00 AM

wow!!!! this is why your one of my fav. poets...love Michael

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 10/23/2010 5:52:00 AM

OH sounds cozy and delightful Francine.. enjoyed your hiding piece this Saturday morn so cold here.. with frost already.. happy weekend my friend with luv..

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 10/22/2010 10:27:00 PM

what a cozy and sweet senryu this is, Francine :) definitely a great way to beat the chill ;) Enjoyed reading this one-- nikko :)