Larry Bradfield Poet Hybronnet

Hidden

Her eyes sparkled as if from wine,
But it was early in the day.
I could near feel her lips on mine,
But she made no effort to stay.

Her feelings hidden somewhere deep
Within her mysterious soul .
She turned to walk as if in sleep,
And left me there alone and cold.

She had buried our only chance
Beneath some dark and hidden past.
As I looked on a dead romance,
And pondered the die she had cast.

Was it love that she had hidden?
What role was this I'd been bidden?


2/8/2017
Hybronnet
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Constance La France February 18, 2017 at 1:52 PM Larry congratulations on your win in my contest with this nice write Larry Bradfield February 18, 2017 at 10:22 PM Thank you for the placement and for sponsoring the contest. Always fun to learn something about poetry!..Larry

Charlie Smith February 18, 2017 at 9:03 AM Well done Larry, congratulations on your placement... Larry Bradfield February 18, 2017 at 10:21 PM Thank you, Charlie

Daniel Turner February 8, 2017 at 5:01 PM I don't know about hybronnets Larry but it would make a darn good 8 syllable sonnet! Well done:) Larry Bradfield February 8, 2017 at 6:52 PM Thanks, Daniel! I don't see the difference either, but that was the definition under Forms?