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Her eyes sparkled as if from wine, But it was early in the day. I could near feel her lips on mine, But she made no effort to stay. Her feelings hidden somewhere deep Within her mysterious soul . She turned to walk as if in sleep, And left me there alone and cold. She had buried our only chance Beneath some dark and hidden past. As I looked on a dead romance, And pondered the die she had cast. Was it love that she had hidden? What role was this I'd been bidden? 2/8/2017 Hybronnet ABABCDCDEFEFGG

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Date: 2/18/2017 1:52:00 PM
Larry congratulations on your win in my contest with this nice write
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Larry Bradfield
Date: 2/18/2017 10:22:00 PM
Thank you for the placement and for sponsoring the contest. Always fun to learn something about poetry!..Larry
Date: 2/18/2017 9:03:00 AM
Well done Larry, congratulations on your placement...
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Larry Bradfield
Date: 2/18/2017 10:21:00 PM
Thank you, Charlie
Date: 2/8/2017 5:01:00 PM
I don't know about hybronnets Larry but it would make a darn good 8 syllable sonnet! Well done:)
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Larry Bradfield
Date: 2/8/2017 6:52:00 PM
Thanks, Daniel! I don't see the difference either, but that was the definition under Forms?

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