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Hi-hat Cardinal, Late-day prayers, Trill heaven-sweet, for night ... Draws nigh. ~ 4th Place ~ in the "Writing Challenge 1, May 2019 - Cinqku" Poetry Contest, Dear Heart, Judge & Sponsor.

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Constance La France

Date: 5/14/2019 10:09:00 AM

Greg congratulations on your win in my writing challenge with this beautifully penned piece and I love the image too!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/13/2019 6:34:00 PM

oh it took me a while and then I caught the clever "cardinal" word play. Congrats. I love the cute video and also how you formatted your poem.

P.S. Awtry

Date: 5/11/2019 9:27:00 AM

Oh this is clever! You did a lot with those few syllables!

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 5/12/2019 2:20:00 AM

That's very kind of you, PS, and I so appreciate the lovely comments! Blessings, my friend! :-) <3