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Hey Old Man

He said, "Hey old man, what you doing in there Living in a cardboard box Why don't you come out of your hole Throw that bottle away and get yourself a job." He said, "Hey old man, are you listening Bet you didn't even hear a word I said. Winter's coming on, and it's getting cold You might be better off dead." The old man said, "Come her son, And I'll tell you a story if you got time. It might help you understand Why I'm living here in this slime. Here's a picture of my little girl With my wife and I loved them so. They were killed by a drunk driver About thirty years ago. Now you might think I'm a useless old drunk And maybe that is true But, you see, when they died in that accident Part of me died too." He told the boy how they would take long walks And played laughingly in the park. He told them about the old oak tree Where they carved their initials in the bark. "My will to live was taken away. My life became a bad dream. I buried my sorrows between bottles Of Jack Daniels and Jim beam So, you see, son, always be careful of The things you say and do Long ago, I had a family And a good life, just like you. The boy shook his hand and gave him a hug As they said their sad good byes When the young boy turned to walk way There were teardrops in his eyes. Vince Suzadail Jr.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2006




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Date: 2/8/2013 3:41:00 PM
another sad and touching one, vince. You understand a lot about human nature! I always knew you as a great person! luv, Andrea
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Date: 8/4/2010 9:49:00 AM
Such a sad sad oft told tale and liquor is legal? sigh BIG hugs! Please read and give insight on my blog! Light & Love
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Date: 5/9/2009 12:11:00 PM
This is really good. it makes you think.
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Date: 5/9/2009 5:30:00 AM
Well deserved accolades on a well written and meaningful piece. Congratulations on having your poem featured this week.
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Date: 5/9/2009 1:46:00 AM
Vince, congrats on your feature of the week...Raul
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Date: 5/8/2009 12:12:00 PM
Beautiful but sad poem Vince, drives home how lucky we are sometimes, James.
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Date: 5/7/2009 12:05:00 PM
Breath taking and enjoyable.! the only 4 words i must say.=] -Reality
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Date: 5/6/2009 3:30:00 PM
Dear Vince,Congratulations on YOUR Featured POEM "Hey Old Man" My Favorite of Your POEMS Many parallels with my past I'm so sorry I have not kept in touch My bad Superb Write well deserved feature Thank-YOU for YOUR Gracious Comments ALWAYS...HG
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Date: 5/6/2009 10:04:00 AM
This gave me goosenbumps and made my eyes prickle. A meaningful and well penned write. Well done on your feature. kat
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Date: 5/6/2009 9:32:00 AM
Vince I really enjoyed this feature. It's touching and really heartfelt. It makes you tear up a little bit and puts a little perspective into ones own life.
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Date: 5/6/2009 8:05:00 AM
This Poem Is Very Nice. It Lieaves minful thoughts in your mind. But YOu SHould Check Out And Comment One Of Mines Soon. =]
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Date: 5/6/2009 7:15:00 AM
Such a sad story I see it from time to time around me it rattles my heart! Great write Vince! Congratulations on your featured poem! Laura :)
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Date: 5/6/2009 1:58:00 AM
I m sorry.. this is a terrible stuff.. highly disappointing ... the moral is too mean
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Date: 5/6/2009 12:41:00 AM
Vince...Just had to come by and read this one through again, once more it gave me goosebumps and a lump in the throat. You got something special here in my opinion. Perhaps something we should all take with us and remind ourselves not too judge others too quickly? Smiles, Anna-Marie...
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Date: 5/5/2009 9:40:00 PM
Okay, that is not allowed, you made me cry LOL but it is so beautifully written I couldn't help myself. Congratulations on being featured this week. Smiles from Lolita
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Date: 5/4/2009 11:24:00 AM
I've commented on this one before, Vince, so big congrats on getting it selected. Love, daver
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Date: 5/4/2009 9:48:00 AM
That is a very touching poem and a great example of why not to judge others. Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. Love, Dane
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Date: 5/4/2009 7:26:00 AM
Oh so heartbreaking! Warmest congrats Vince an an awesome featured write. Love, Shar
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Date: 5/4/2009 4:00:00 AM
Wonderful writing, Congratulations on being featured, kindest thoughts, Anna-Marie.
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Date: 5/4/2009 3:34:00 AM
awww a great poem congrats on your feature, God bless you vince from diane
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Date: 5/4/2009 1:13:00 AM
Congrats on your feature this week Vince Rgds Brian
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Date: 5/3/2009 11:13:00 PM
Hi Vince my friend, very sad write. You made my eyes wet. Congratulations on your featured peom. Mine is also featured this week. Ernilando
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Date: 5/3/2009 6:18:00 PM
I am so glad this was among the featured works this week, ...I missed it when first posted! What a beautifully written poem, Vince! Sad and so compassionate. Congratulations on this one being featured...so deserving! ~
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Date: 11/1/2008 7:38:00 AM
Your poem is so beautifully written, it brought tears to my eyes.. the pain of losing someone you love is so difficult.. you might enjoy my poem..Angels Created... death can take a person in different directions.. to despair.. or to a higher thinking.. a different path.. I think all the sadness and happiness in my life .. have given me ...eyes to see and to write.. Constance
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