Hey Old Man

He said, "Hey old man, what you doing in there
Living in a cardboard box
Why don't you come out of your hole
Throw that bottle away and get yourself a job."
He said, "Hey old man, are you listening
Bet you didn't even hear a word I said.
Winter's coming on, and it's getting cold
You might be better off dead."
The old man said, "Come her son,
And I'll tell you a story if you got time.
It might help you understand 
Why I'm living here in this slime.
Here's a picture of my little girl
With my wife and I loved them so.
They were killed by a drunk driver
About thirty years ago.
Now you might think I'm a useless old drunk
And maybe that is true
But, you see, when they died in that accident
Part of me died too."
He told the boy how they would take long walks
And played laughingly in the park.
He told them about the old oak tree
Where they carved their initials in the bark.
"My will to live was taken away.
My life became a bad dream.
I buried my sorrows between bottles
Of Jack Daniels and Jim beam
So, you see, son, always be careful of
The things you say and do
Long ago, I had a family
And a good life, just like you.
The boy shook his hand and gave him a hug
As they said their sad good byes
When the young boy turned to walk way
There were teardrops in his eyes.

                               Vince Suzadail Jr.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2006

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Dietrich Avatar
February 8, 2013 at 3:41 PM
another sad and touching one, vince. You understand a lot about human nature! I always knew you as a great person! luv, Andrea
Guzzi Avatar
August 4, 2010 at 9:49 AM
Such a sad sad oft told tale and liquor is legal? sigh BIG hugs! Please read and give insight on my blog! Light & Love
Poet Avatar
May 9, 2009 at 12:11 PM
This is really good. it makes you think.
Nutter Avatar
May 9, 2009 at 5:30 AM
Well deserved accolades on a well written and meaningful piece. Congratulations on having your poem featured this week.
Moreno Avatar
May 9, 2009 at 1:46 AM
Vince, congrats on your feature of the week...Raul
Fraser Avatar
May 8, 2009 at 12:12 PM
Beautiful but sad poem Vince, drives home how lucky we are sometimes, James.
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May 7, 2009 at 12:05 PM
Breath taking and enjoyable.! the only 4 words i must say.=] -Reality
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May 6, 2009 at 3:30 PM
Dear Vince,Congratulations on YOUR Featured POEM "Hey Old Man" My Favorite of Your POEMS Many parallels with my past I'm so sorry I have not kept in touch My bad Superb Write well deserved feature Thank-YOU for YOUR Gracious Comments ALWAYS...HG
Crane Avatar
May 6, 2009 at 10:04 AM
This gave me goosenbumps and made my eyes prickle. A meaningful and well penned write. Well done on your feature. kat
Marshall Avatar
May 6, 2009 at 9:32 AM
Vince I really enjoyed this feature. It's touching and really heartfelt. It makes you tear up a little bit and puts a little perspective into ones own life.
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May 6, 2009 at 8:05 AM
This Poem Is Very Nice. It Lieaves minful thoughts in your mind. But YOu SHould Check Out And Comment One Of Mines Soon. =]
Mckenzie Avatar
May 6, 2009 at 7:15 AM
Such a sad story I see it from time to time around me it rattles my heart! Great write Vince! Congratulations on your featured poem! Laura :)
Ganesh S Avatar
May 6, 2009 at 1:58 AM
I m sorry.. this is a terrible stuff.. highly disappointing ... the moral is too mean
Docherty Avatar
May 6, 2009 at 12:41 AM
Vince...Just had to come by and read this one through again, once more it gave me goosebumps and a lump in the throat. You got something special here in my opinion. Perhaps something we should all take with us and remind ourselves not too judge others too quickly? Smiles, Anna-Marie...
Townsend Avatar
May 5, 2009 at 9:40 PM
Okay, that is not allowed, you made me cry LOL but it is so beautifully written I couldn't help myself. Congratulations on being featured this week. Smiles from Lolita
Austin Avatar
May 4, 2009 at 11:24 AM
I've commented on this one before, Vince, so big congrats on getting it selected. Love, daver
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May 4, 2009 at 9:48 AM
That is a very touching poem and a great example of why not to judge others. Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. Love, Dane
Winter Avatar
May 4, 2009 at 7:26 AM
Oh so heartbreaking! Warmest congrats Vince an an awesome featured write. Love, Shar
Docherty Avatar
May 4, 2009 at 4:00 AM
Wonderful writing, Congratulations on being featured, kindest thoughts, Anna-Marie.
Christian Avatar
May 4, 2009 at 3:34 AM
awww a great poem congrats on your feature, God bless you vince from diane
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May 4, 2009 at 1:13 AM
Congrats on your feature this week Vince Rgds Brian
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May 3, 2009 at 11:13 PM
Hi Vince my friend, very sad write. You made my eyes wet. Congratulations on your featured peom. Mine is also featured this week. Ernilando
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May 3, 2009 at 6:18 PM
I am so glad this was among the featured works this week, ...I missed it when first posted! What a beautifully written poem, Vince! Sad and so compassionate. Congratulations on this one being featured...so deserving! ~
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November 1, 2008 at 7:38 AM
Your poem is so beautifully written, it brought tears to my eyes.. the pain of losing someone you love is so difficult.. you might enjoy my poem..Angels Created... death can take a person in different directions.. to despair.. or to a higher thinking.. a different path.. I think all the sadness and happiness in my life .. have given me ...eyes to see and to write.. Constance
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