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Hey James, what do you see

On holiday my eyes observed So tanned and beautifully curved Her eyes turned to me Hey! James what do you see? Patience, you'll receive your deserves .

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 4/7/2015 7:38:00 AM
:)!!! the 4th line made me giggle.. :)! weeeee Dino James!!!tight hugs..olive eloisa
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James Fraser
Date: 4/8/2015 1:43:00 PM
Hey! James what did you see ;-) Eyes Wide Shut, weeeeee, warm hugs always little one, Dino James xx
Date: 4/6/2015 12:13:00 PM
Great holiday!! Enjoyed reading ..Thanks for the visits to my page..Sara
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Date: 4/6/2015 12:28:00 PM
It sure was Sara, sometimes moments in life are meant to be, James :) :)
Date: 4/6/2015 7:39:00 AM
Did you say you'd get your deserves or your dessert ;)
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Date: 4/6/2015 7:48:00 AM
Just desserts, now why didn't I travel down that road to write ;-) Happy Easter Monday to you Dave, James :) :)
Date: 4/6/2015 6:49:00 AM
A mysterious and charming limerick James ... I hope she saw everything her heart desired ... and more:-) Hugs jan xx 7 xx
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Date: 4/6/2015 8:09:00 AM
Happy Easter Monday to you Jan. No constraint, no complaints for in my dreams I faint at the beauty of she, hugs //xx//James xx