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Hey James, What Do You See


On holiday my eyes observed
So tanned and beautifully curved
Her eyes turned to me
Hey! James what do you see?
Patience, you'll receive your deserves




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Copyright © James Fraser | Year Posted 2015

beautifulbeautyfuturehappyholidaylimerick

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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

April 7, 2015 at 7:38 AM

:)!!! the 4th line made me giggle.. :)! weeeee Dino James!!!tight hugs..olive eloisa

April 8, 2015 at 1:43 PM

Hey! James what did you see ;-) Eyes Wide Shut, weeeeee, warm hugs always little one, Dino James xx

April 6, 2015 at 12:13 PM

Great holiday!! Enjoyed reading ..Thanks for the visits to my page..Sara

April 6, 2015 at 12:28 PM

It sure was Sara, sometimes moments in life are meant to be, James :) :)

April 6, 2015 at 6:49 AM

A mysterious and charming limerick James ... I hope she saw everything her heart desired ... and more:-) Hugs jan xx 7 xx

April 6, 2015 at 8:09 AM

Happy Easter Monday to you Jan. No constraint, no complaints for in my dreams I faint at the beauty of she, hugs //xx//James xx

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