Hermit Crab's Cushion

(first stanza only for contest)

We hermit crabs smile at our grousing
a crack in my shell needs espousing. 
   I spy a cigarette; 
  the filter, perfect fit -
could it cushion my cleft in housing?

If filters could help tummy’s small crack
better shell I won’t have to hijack.
   Should I try a quick smoke
   while I  nit-pick and croak?
Then laziness can get back on track.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Dietrich Avatar
June 15, 2025 at 10:33 AM
S practical crab! Congrats in the contest
Poteet Avatar
June 15, 2025 at 4:23 PM
Hermit crabs are creative as well. Thanks for commenting, Andrea.
Fowler Avatar
June 15, 2025 at 7:28 AM
Funny Reason. Congratulations! :)
Poteet Avatar
June 15, 2025 at 4:23 PM
I thank you, Linda. Glad you got my gist.
May Avatar
June 14, 2025 at 11:33 AM
Very nicely penned Reason, Congrats on your win
Poteet Avatar
June 15, 2025 at 4:24 PM
thank you, Joseph for the contest and the placement. Tis appreciated.
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