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Her Smell Is Awful

Others love her, singing her praises. I reject her in the bowels of my soul. Some see beauty, write her up in poems. I see her as a sinister, angry, killing beast. Many profess to adore the ocean. They use fancy words, decorating her meanness. I know better. Her smell is awful; her depth repulses me. Who knows what murderous secrets she hides? I believe she killed me in another lifetime Her smell causes my heart to feel terror. Hearing phantom boot steps approaching, I turn quickly, expecting a gruesome death.

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Date: 11/28/2020 9:55:00 AM
Wow! I think you are right about a previous life experience. You certainly express your loathing of the ocean in this piece. Thank you for sharing, dear Caren.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 11/28/2020 7:40:00 PM
Thank you Elaine. I am one of the few people who seems to loathe the smell of the sea.

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