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"I read the news today, oh boy" - Beatles apocalyptic revelations spinning 'round inside my head/have me tossing keep me turning wide awake upon my bed/so much hating too much lying chaos just outside my door/brainwashed zombies from their pulpits spewing vitriol and more/horsemen riding children dying famine warfare take their toll/politicians see their ratings drop in value with each poll/earth is battered lives are shattered bombs and land mines maim or kill/ Satan laughing spreads his wings as mankind wallows in his swill/locusts gather then they scatter out to spread the word of doom/news crawls flash across the telly in the safety of my room/insurrection tribulation agitating anxious minds/weary travelers seeking refuge thus fulfill prophetic signs/lift your heads up never give up soon will come the final fight/Armageddon's day of judgment soon will set all matters right "Run to the hills, run for your lives" - Iron Maiden broken trams cause traffic jams that clog the streets and alleyways/people running seeking shelter for it's now the end of days/can you hide us will you save us from the wrath of Christ the king/every day yes everywhere we hear his judgment message ring/ law defying God offending wicked men will merit death/liars rapists pedophiles blaspheme with their dying breath/peace they cry out strife they mete out hypocrites will face their end/frogs keep croaking propaganda via media it wends/retribution’s in all creatures causing some to turn on man/seven-headed beastlike monster marches to the Devil’s plan/Babylon with all her daughters sing a song of treachery/to their gods they give allegiance - spiritistic witchery/when the end comes have we earned some merit with the One who reigns/future blessings in the offing paradise will end all pain “Amen. Come Lord Jesus” – Bible

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Date: 4/18/2024 1:30:00 AM
Wow. That flowed so nicely... perfect rhythm. The content is thought provoking, uncomfortable, disturbing, and then finally, hopeful. Any great art will make us feel a riot of emotions, truly outstanding art will also provoke action and change. I believe you have that here and in some of your other writings. All the best, Crystol
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Tom Woody
Date: 4/18/2024 5:00:00 AM
You always hope someone is paying attention. One heart in a million...
Date: 3/20/2024 6:35:00 AM
Wow, there's a lot in this, reminds me of something I was working on. It was too long to post here in this comment, but I just posted it to my site - "Elitist's Outcome"
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Tom Woody
Date: 3/20/2024 6:46:00 AM
Thx for visit Woodster
Date: 1/7/2024 9:29:00 AM
And to think we are not even halfway yet to how horrible it will be. Loved the bit about the media as frogs croaking propaganda You sure got that one right.
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Tom Woody
Date: 1/7/2024 9:38:00 AM
Thx. That's actually borrowed from Revelation 16:14-16
Date: 1/6/2024 4:07:00 AM
I'm not going to comment on the religious aspects of your poem (he says commenting on the religious aspects of your poem) but I just love your rhyming here Tommy. The line "news crawls flash across the telly in the safety of my room" hits home with a kick. The use of lyrics add to the piece. Iron M's - land grab from Native Americans & Lennon's: car crash. Maybe Helter Skelter (a spiral slide) signifies society's ride / fall from grace from the top to the bottom in your poem too? Cheers - Gary
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Tom Woody
Date: 1/6/2024 5:58:00 AM
Tried my best not to force the rhymes and I think they worked pretty well. As far as the message, the Great Tribulation will be total chaos Gary. Thx for visit
Date: 1/5/2024 7:17:00 PM
Sigh, this world has really been shadowed by dark forces and manipulative influences who cover minds with fogs of confusion with their hypocrisy..zombie brains can't overcome their brainwashed state and the Satan keeps laughing at their perish..It's such a disheartening situation all around the world.But, there's still faith in my heart, that one day, God will spread his supreme shine and then, every soul would heal..This is a deeply moving write!You always convey your thoughts in a profound way
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Tom Woody
Date: 1/6/2024 5:59:00 AM
Yes one day things will change Hiya, as my latest poem highlights. Thx for being here
Date: 1/3/2024 6:05:00 PM
I can't stress how important it is to read the news and everyday. A well-informed electorate is needed for democracy to work. Although I have a place in my heart for all Christians who do not celebrate anything or keep abreast of the news...I must assert my firm believe that someone has to vote and take care of what Jesus would refer to as the most unfortunate among us. Healthy New Year to you and yours!
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I Am Anaya
Date: 1/4/2024 6:36:00 AM
Awesome! May your wishes come true
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Tom Woody
Date: 1/3/2024 8:05:00 PM
It's not a fantasy, it's already begun. In 240 lands JW's live in peace and follow the mandate at John 13:35, ie, to love one another. In the new world to come all will be serving God in unity. One world government, one religion, one united brotherhood of man
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I Am Anaya
Date: 1/3/2024 6:37:00 PM
adopt a cat or dog!
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I Am Anaya
Date: 1/3/2024 6:35:00 PM
A fantasy we all share with whatever religion we wish it to be. We will all become JW's when the POPE converts to Judaism. Nice try.
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Tom Woody
Date: 1/3/2024 6:21:00 PM
Well, two things: I do read the news daily and I told you before I voted for Jesus as my king in 1984 and that vote was permanent. And btw, if everyone in the world was JW there would be no issues to debate, no need for truces or police. Something to think about - Matthew 5:5
Date: 1/3/2024 1:22:00 PM
Faith is our solace and life sustaining.. God is our saviour.. We always need to awaken strengthen what is dormant within us.. always we need to be surrounded by those who believe in us and are able to be of help and great support in times of weakness.. I always believe and envision a world of Beauty, peace and Love.. I miss a lot being here among you.. belated merry Christmas and Happy New Year, Tom..So much pleased to read your so unique poetry ! May God bless you. Best regards.
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Tom Woody
Date: 1/3/2024 1:24:00 PM
We miss you Besma! PS isn't the same when you're not around
Date: 1/2/2024 7:31:00 PM
I, too, stay away from the news; it is all doom and gloom, yet in the growing awareness that seems to be getting stronger and brighter, I believe that Love and Hope will be a transformative change to a better World. Good will always overpower Bad. as you say in your closing line...One who reigns/future blessings in the offing paradise will end all pain. For sure...Hugs
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Tom Woody
Date: 1/3/2024 5:23:00 AM
Thx so much sweet Maria
Date: 1/2/2024 6:39:00 PM
That's some heavy hitting, Tommy. The world looks like the end is near over and over, but still many prophecies to be fulfilled. Like you said, this is just the beginning. It will get worse before it gets better. Telling it like it can scare a few into believing, but the Love when all hell is breaking loose will win more. IMHO Have a pleasant day. Bill
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Tom Woody
Date: 1/2/2024 7:11:00 PM
Fear has never been a good or proper motivator. Like you said, it has to be love and appreciation. Nevertheless, people need to know what is ahead. The Great Tribulation will be a frightening time for unbelievers and willful sinners - 2 Thessalonians 1:6-9. The time left to repent has been reduced
Date: 1/2/2024 8:13:00 AM
Sounds like the 60s as much a today's craziness
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Tom Woody
Date: 1/2/2024 1:20:00 PM
:)
Date: 1/2/2024 3:42:00 AM
We do have prophetic thoughts. Sorry for nor writing before. A Happy New Year.
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Tom Woody
Date: 1/2/2024 5:33:00 AM
Hope you're ok Victor. Thx for visit
Date: 1/1/2024 9:51:00 PM
This has sent goosebumps all over me and the apocalyptic predictions make me shudder. Man is scripting his own doom and he is running helter skelter! Hair raising descriptions, dear Tom !
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Tom Woody
Date: 1/2/2024 5:33:00 AM
Oh, the Great Tribulation will be worse. Much worse. Thx for stopping by Valsa
Date: 1/1/2024 7:14:00 PM
Dear Tom, your golden pen is as potent as it is poetic, and the ink you spill is dark. I enjoyed the musical quotes as they add a textured foreshadow to the stanza. Your quote from the Bible is a master stroke and a grand finale your powerful apocalyptic expression. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Tom Woody
Date: 1/2/2024 5:34:00 AM
Appreciate your visit Susan
Date: 1/1/2024 5:39:00 AM
This felt so deep-- your message tolls of doom. Quite an original poem, Tom. Not sure what will save us in the end. I am guessing we have to do that ourselves.
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Tom Woody
Date: 1/1/2024 5:44:00 AM
Exercising faith in the Son of man and his Father and doing the Father's will is the only way Veej. Thx for visit
Date: 12/31/2023 1:12:00 AM
This poem speaks volumes about the impending doom due to our current social norms, I love it! Keep up the great work tom
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Tom Woody
Date: 12/31/2023 5:54:00 AM
We're working on it. Thx much
Date: 12/30/2023 6:00:00 PM
So difficult indeed, being surrounded by devils influence. So many false teachers in the world. Those following Christ and striving to live the best they can, truly know peace.
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Brandy Nicole
Date: 12/30/2023 6:43:00 PM
I want to see you there too.
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Tom Woody
Date: 12/30/2023 6:18:00 PM
Yes difficult, and I want to survive and see the paradise on the other side, and I want to see you there too
Date: 12/30/2023 4:56:00 PM
such a profound and powerful poem, Tom! Although I'm not into anything apocalyptic, your words spoke to me. Have a great evening, Sara
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Tom Woody
Date: 12/30/2023 5:13:00 PM
All the signs are there Sara (Matthew ch 24; 2 Timothy 3:1-5) thx for visit
Date: 12/30/2023 4:16:00 PM
Powerful piece indeed, Tommy-kins. I'm standing at Eden's Gate awaiting the grand re-opening. It is finished...:o)
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Tom Woody
Date: 12/30/2023 4:25:00 PM
Coming soon to a planet near you. Thx
Date: 12/30/2023 3:40:00 PM
Helter-skelter melter-swelter welter, Mmmmm
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Tom Woody
Date: 12/30/2023 4:08:00 PM
Touche Sottomyer
Date: 12/30/2023 7:55:00 AM
Profound truths you’ve conveyed here. That iron maiden line i think I remember before.. not sure as my memory is pretty bad however youve written a very powerful poem as always. And i think right now with so much going around we definitely are in need of a reality check. Just like silent one, i dont watch or read the news as its too much sometimes.. and can trigger anxiety, hypocrites i know so many of them in my real life. last lines hit so strong! Just brilliant! made me a bit scared.whoa!
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Tom Woody
Date: 12/30/2023 9:38:00 AM
Appreciate your visit and commentary, knowing as I do apocalyptic poetry really isn't your gig
Date: 12/30/2023 7:19:00 AM
you've been saving this for new year to cheer us all up haven't ya! but the darkest hour is before the dawn..
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Charlotte Puddifoot
Date: 1/1/2024 2:55:00 AM
aww that's sweet :) i'd like to see the satanic control system dismantled, and for humanity to play an active part in that, not just sit around waiting for a saviour to come and do it all for them..may i wish you a happy new year, is that allowed? well i'm saying it anyway lol
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Tom Woody
Date: 12/31/2023 2:37:00 PM
I'd love to see you at the dawn of a new world free of pain Charlotte
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Charlotte Puddifoot
Date: 12/31/2023 7:28:00 AM
yeah it's enough to make people poison themselves, a bit like jonestown...
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Tom Woody
Date: 12/30/2023 9:37:00 AM
Yo ho ho and a bottle of arsenic laced rum. The Devil's busier than ever. Keep on the watch dear Charlotte
Date: 12/30/2023 6:49:00 AM
I normally stay away from the news, as most of these channels just brainwash with their own hidden agendas, especially the right wing ones.. You describe the world in a 'helter skelter' realm perfectly and its a true reality of the world, many await the Messiah, but he does not arrive... maybe the world is not at its darkest point.. damn, it can get darker? You wrote this very well Tom.. All the best..
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Tom Woody
Date: 12/30/2023 9:38:00 AM
Hold on SO, this is just the pre-show. Thx for visit

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