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Hello Sorrow, Hello Grief with Tim Smith

Tim's poem, Hello Sorrow, was the incentive for my continuance of the sorrowful emotion in Hello Grief.

Hello Sorrow

There you are old friend— 
 I knew that you were here 
  wrapped alone beside desolation 
   hidden deep amongst despair 

Hello my sorrow there you lie— 
 in the wallow of disdain 
  shun me forth in misery 
   regret infused past pain

          ~     ~     ~

Hello Grief

Here you are once again
  I knew you would return
   as a shadow of my sorrow
    when for her arms I yearn

Hello grief, my haunting friend
 ghostly memory of my heartache
  how long will you remain 
    for a love I must forsake
      
  

   

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 11/26/2017 11:42:00 AM
What I like best about my friend, How marvelous God has no end; Grant reprieve, And me relieve; Saved me from sin He did intend.
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Date: 11/13/2017 4:10:00 PM
This is beautiful Lin! Time is the only healer, but faith escorts and helps along the way. Exceptional! xxoo : )
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Lin Lane
Date: 11/13/2017 5:46:00 PM
Thank you, Connie. Credit to Tim for my thoughts.
Date: 11/13/2017 8:48:00 AM
Hello — TRIPLE WOWSA!!!
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Lin Lane
Date: 11/13/2017 8:52:00 AM
Thanks an awfully big bunch, John.
Date: 11/13/2017 4:26:00 AM
WOW! This is a truly wonderful write my friend! I really loved these glorious poems, so filled with emotion, and they express them so well! I really enjoyed reading your illustrious piece here this morning, your amazing poem is full of grief and sorrow! Great Work!!
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Lin Lane
Date: 11/13/2017 8:52:00 AM
Thank you oodles, Russell.
Date: 11/12/2017 9:12:00 PM
Hello Sorrow and Grief, I am sadness, and I loved this well expressed poem!
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Lin Lane
Date: 11/13/2017 8:51:00 AM
Hello Sadness. Come and share our table. You're welcome to commiserate with us.
Date: 11/12/2017 2:48:00 PM
Very emotional and deep. Inspiration can do wonderful things.
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Lin Lane
Date: 11/13/2017 8:50:00 AM
Thanks so very much, Eileen.
Date: 11/12/2017 2:02:00 PM
Wonderful echo poem that accentuates and compliments Tim's write! Well done Lin enjoyed!
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Date: 11/12/2017 1:18:00 PM
Wow Lin I read and commented on Tim's poem and you have written two wonderful verses which compliment Tim's line so well I am adding it to my faves:-) hugs jan xx
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Lin Lane
Date: 11/12/2017 1:20:00 PM
Thanks a bundle, Jan. As soon as I read Tim's poem I knew I wanted to express what I was feeling,
Date: 11/12/2017 1:15:00 PM
You did a terrific job with this Lin...a fav for me
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Lin Lane
Date: 11/12/2017 1:19:00 PM
Thank you very much, Tim. The sadness of your words were significant enough to inspire grief. Thanks for the fav.