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Hello Mum

It’s not what she hears that day No. It’s what she sees, The image very nearly killed her The neighbours say the scream was heard two blocks away Though she can’t recall hearing what was said No. It’s what she sees alright Even to this day, she can feel the envelope She can see the “WESTERN UNION” through the milky window She can see the “THE SECRETARY OF WAR DESIRES ME TO EXPRESS…” What she doesn’t hear, is what the Telegram Boy had to say She still has the Telegram Its yellow parchment a little brittle, the typed words “HIS DEEP REGRET THAT YOUR SON…” a little smudged, tears she guesses Though she doesn’t remember any tears, they came later Along with the pain of not knowing, and the sorrow of knowing Then almost a year to that day, it’s not what she hears But what every mother would want to see What every mother would want to feel And every mother would dearly love to hear “Hello mum, I’m home…” 8 May 2015 Craig Cornish’s Poetry Contest “A Mother’s Ears”

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Date: 9/22/2015 7:09:00 PM
Mark, congratulations on your win. SKAT
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Date: 9/22/2015 1:12:00 AM
Wonderful expressions Mark! Congrats on big win!
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Date: 9/20/2015 1:13:00 PM
Dropping back with my congrats:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 6/12/2015 1:11:00 AM
Hi Mark...a sad write, a consequence of war or the cost of peace...at the end of that chain, a parent with a grave loss...cheers, 7habang
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Date: 5/11/2015 8:19:00 PM
Well written with poetic flow aided by superb imagery. It tantalizes us with prefect sadness to seduce us with the nectar of poetic creativity. Emile. #7
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Date: 5/11/2015 3:38:00 PM
wow, this is a very touching story and ends up with a good ending. Sometimes people are wrongly informed about things. That is such a happy twist of fate. Nicely done!!
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Date: 5/11/2015 6:50:00 AM
Marl, oh my gosh, let me wipe the tears away, how moving and beautiful, it was amazing, 7, and thanks for visiting my poem, A Hundred. . .
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Date: 5/10/2015 11:39:00 PM
I am touched... your poem brought tears to my eyes... the plight of a mother who has lost her child is aomething that cannot be expressed in words... great pen #7 ... a fav... nadiya
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Date: 5/10/2015 7:36:00 PM
I came here first to thank you for your kind comment on my "Rumi" poem, but became too engrossed in this remarkable poem and your emotional twist in "what a mother's ears" cannot hear, in times of such deep pain or grief. Oh wow....I'm glad I caught this one. I too, couldn't help but mention what a mother "sees", in my own entry, .., ..knowing mothers need all their senses, but also knowing that she might have cause to not want to see.....not want to hear, ...in such troubling times. Well done!
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Date: 5/8/2015 5:36:00 AM
Such an emotional write Mark i was hooked from start to end - can only image the pain of this situation - good luck in the contest:-) Hugs Jan xx 7 xx
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Mark Trichet
Date: 5/8/2015 5:18:00 PM
Thanks Jan, Im glad you liked it.

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