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Hello, January

Hello, January Yea, the Roman God Janus The ruler of new beginnings, The first hour of the day The first day of the month The first month of the year. You are blessed with two heads One head to look forward And the other for retrospective view I take inspirations from your two heads For new objectives and new commitments And to renew the old commitments. To cast the old and welcome the new. The shortest day has passed The days are getting longer Soon I can stay out in a twilight. Though January named after you, Two seasonal diversions are around To ease the bites of winter. Though there’s quietness all around But secret activities are in full swing The soil absorbs the pure rains And micro organisms converting Fodder into usable nutrients For the next crop of plants. The hungry earthworms force a way Impregnating the soil to welcome The seeds and bare roots to come.
++++++++++++++++++++++++ Date 8-1-14 Form: Free verse Dr. Ram Mehta Second Place win Contest: Hello, January by Vicky Tsulima

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Date: 1/31/2014 11:55:00 PM
Nice one Doctor. You really impressed me with this write. You are a true bard. ~Kilmer
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Date: 1/22/2014 8:23:00 AM
I had simply loved this so much when I read it first.. and enjoyed reading this again! Congrats Dr Ram on your win with this splendid write! Regards...
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Date: 1/21/2014 6:51:00 PM
Nice that you started the poem with some background on the month. Congrats, Dr. !
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Date: 1/21/2014 8:54:00 AM
Way to go with a great win..Congrats..Thanks for stopping by with congrats.Sara
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Date: 1/21/2014 3:45:00 AM
A worth winning poem. Congratulations, sir.
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Date: 1/20/2014 10:40:00 PM
Hey, BIG congrats in the contest, Dr. Ram. You rocked it!
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Date: 1/20/2014 2:12:00 PM
- Hello January, contest is judged / / Sponsored by: Vicky Tsiluma - Congratulations on your winning poem,Dr.Ram. - Nice to take part - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/20/2014 1:44:00 PM
Congratulations on a fine winning poem, Dr. Ram!!!
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Date: 1/20/2014 11:45:00 AM
Congrats on a great win Dr Ram
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Date: 1/20/2014 10:11:00 AM
Excellently penned Dr. Ram! You've tackled the theme of January well and gone ahead to execute it brilliantly. Very well penned!
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Date: 1/10/2014 1:34:00 PM
A very nice one here.. Sameh
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Date: 1/9/2014 6:51:00 PM
you took a very intellectual approach, Dr. Ram. Very nice!!
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Date: 1/9/2014 1:10:00 PM
You've created a perfect picture of January, Dr. Ram! More impressive is your painting it in words that flow and blend well together! A definite winner, I am sure! Happy New Year! Always, Annalise
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Date: 1/9/2014 12:35:00 PM
Reads like a winner to me..Enjoyed reading about the Roman God Janus..Thanks for the faithfulness in reviewing my work..Sara
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Date: 1/9/2014 7:18:00 AM
Wonderful poem..
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Date: 1/9/2014 4:22:00 AM
awesome poem Dr.Mehta. Happy new year. I have been to a prayer retreat for some time.I couldn't log into PS. Is there any problem Dr. Mehta? PD's poem is full of anger. Kindly console her. (: ) Jenish.
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Date: 1/9/2014 12:31:00 AM
Good job with the poem and January. Love the write; still don't really like January, but I'll consider further.
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Date: 1/8/2014 2:07:00 PM
I don't think anyone could describe January any better than you did in this poem Dr Ram, Nice job.....Roger
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Date: 1/8/2014 11:02:00 AM
Hello friend Ram, this is a great piece. very creative. Good luck in the contest. hugs :)
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Date: 1/8/2014 4:03:00 AM
WOW....January is glorified in this poem, Dr Ram....Very informative and creative in its beauty......Newness...Promise of things to come. I liked the idea of making new commitments and renewing old ones....Very sweet
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Date: 1/8/2014 3:52:00 AM
- Here you have posted the winning poem Dr. Ram !!! - It is a wonderful poem, to face the new year! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/8/2014 2:30:00 AM
Perfect images of land, soil, season; could smell the earthiness of the soil, the crops in the early morning, and the earth worms,you did not miss. It's a beautiful sketch! Always great pleasure in reading your works... Regards..
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