Hello, January

Hello, January Yea, the Roman God Janus The ruler of new beginnings, The first hour of the day The first day of the month The first month of the year. You are blessed with two heads One head to look forward And the other for retrospective view I take inspirations from your two heads For new objectives and new commitments And to renew the old commitments. To cast the old and welcome the new. The shortest day has passed The days are getting longer Soon I can stay out in a twilight. Though January named after you, Two seasonal diversions are around To ease the bites of winter. Though there’s quietness all around But secret activities are in full swing The soil absorbs the pure rains And micro organisms converting Fodder into usable nutrients For the next crop of plants. The hungry earthworms force a way Impregnating the soil to welcome The seeds and bare roots to come.
++++++++++++++++++++++++ Date 8-1-14 Form: Free verse Dr. Ram Mehta Second Place win Contest: Hello, January by Vicky Tsulima
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Kilmer Avatar
January 31, 2014 at 11:55 PM
Nice one Doctor. You really impressed me with this write. You are a true bard. ~Kilmer
Phookan Avatar
January 22, 2014 at 8:23 AM
I had simply loved this so much when I read it first.. and enjoyed reading this again! Congrats Dr Ram on your win with this splendid write! Regards...
Ligon Avatar
January 21, 2014 at 6:51 PM
Nice that you started the poem with some background on the month. Congrats, Dr. !
Kendrick Avatar
January 21, 2014 at 8:54 AM
Way to go with a great win..Congrats..Thanks for stopping by with congrats.Sara
Garg Avatar
January 21, 2014 at 3:45 AM
A worth winning poem. Congratulations, sir.
Dietrich Avatar
January 20, 2014 at 10:40 PM
Hey, BIG congrats in the contest, Dr. Ram. You rocked it!
Andresen Avatar
January 20, 2014 at 2:12 PM
- Hello January, contest is judged / / Sponsored by: Vicky Tsiluma - Congratulations on your winning poem,Dr.Ram. - Nice to take part - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Richards Avatar
January 20, 2014 at 1:44 PM
Congratulations on a fine winning poem, Dr. Ram!!!
May Avatar
January 20, 2014 at 11:45 AM
Congrats on a great win Dr Ram
Tsiluma Avatar
January 20, 2014 at 10:11 AM
Excellently penned Dr. Ram! You've tackled the theme of January well and gone ahead to execute it brilliantly. Very well penned!
Wahid Avatar
January 10, 2014 at 1:34 PM
A very nice one here.. Sameh
Dietrich Avatar
January 9, 2014 at 6:51 PM
you took a very intellectual approach, Dr. Ram. Very nice!!
Haick Avatar
January 9, 2014 at 1:10 PM
You've created a perfect picture of January, Dr. Ram! More impressive is your painting it in words that flow and blend well together! A definite winner, I am sure! Happy New Year! Always, Annalise
Kendrick Avatar
January 9, 2014 at 12:35 PM
Reads like a winner to me..Enjoyed reading about the Roman God Janus..Thanks for the faithfulness in reviewing my work..Sara
Madappattu Avatar
January 9, 2014 at 7:18 AM
Wonderful poem..
Undertaker Avatar
January 9, 2014 at 4:22 AM
awesome poem Dr.Mehta. Happy new year. I have been to a prayer retreat for some time.I couldn't log into PS. Is there any problem Dr. Mehta? PD's poem is full of anger. Kindly console her. (: ) Jenish.
Peterson Avatar
January 9, 2014 at 12:31 AM
Good job with the poem and January. Love the write; still don't really like January, but I'll consider further.
Horsch Avatar
January 8, 2014 at 2:07 PM
I don't think anyone could describe January any better than you did in this poem Dr Ram, Nice job.....Roger
Liwayway Avatar
January 8, 2014 at 11:02 AM
Hello friend Ram, this is a great piece. very creative. Good luck in the contest. hugs :)
Manassian Avatar
January 8, 2014 at 4:03 AM
WOW....January is glorified in this poem, Dr Ram....Very informative and creative in its beauty......Newness...Promise of things to come. I liked the idea of making new commitments and renewing old ones....Very sweet
Andresen Avatar
January 8, 2014 at 3:52 AM
- Here you have posted the winning poem Dr. Ram !!! - It is a wonderful poem, to face the new year! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Phookan Avatar
January 8, 2014 at 2:30 AM
Perfect images of land, soil, season; could smell the earthiness of the soil, the crops in the early morning, and the earth worms,you did not miss. It's a beautiful sketch! Always great pleasure in reading your works... Regards..
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