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Held In Her Grasp

What is this power that she holds over me? She holds my very soul within her grasp I follow her, to the edge of the sea. She looks at me and I can't help but Gasp. Her spell transports me, to a brand new world. She holds my very soul within her grasp. Out of control as if being hurled. Loves is multiplied, by two moons rising. Her spell transports me, to a brand new world. We become two planets, worlds colliding. Attraction, beyond imagination. Love is multiplied, by two moons rising We are aligned in perfect position. Our beings melded, nothing else exists. Attraction, beyond imagination. I may be her slave, still I won't resist. Our beings melded, nothing else exists. What is this power she holds over me? I follow her, to the edge of the sea.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 10/20/2014 1:08:00 PM
:) Came back to read some of the older writes.....Sweet....
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Date: 4/27/2013 9:12:00 PM
You are so amazing with this form. I'm inspired to try it, but....I don't know if I can wing it. You make it fly. :)
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/27/2013 9:38:00 PM
I have no doubt you would do an amazing job. Becca helped me master it, you should as her to help she is a good teacher.
Date: 12/20/2012 12:58:00 PM
wow, Richard. This reads like a marvelous model of the form for your own fantasy contest! (minus the questionku chaser) You did a great terzanelle.
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Date: 12/20/2012 10:21:00 AM
Two thumbs up! Gorgeous finale! :D
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Date: 12/20/2012 6:31:00 AM
Can't wait xx
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/20/2012 7:27:00 AM
All done.
Date: 12/20/2012 5:53:00 AM
Nice;y written my west coast compatriot! When will we see the rest? Cheers, Jake
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/20/2012 7:01:00 AM
Thanks Jack, tute fini.
Date: 12/19/2012 11:55:00 PM
Can't wait to see it in complete form :) must be great - hug, Yanny
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/20/2012 6:30:00 AM
On my way
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 12/20/2012 12:27:00 AM
soupmail :)
Date: 12/19/2012 9:34:00 PM
Hello Richard, what a great start, will look forward to the completion. Rollo
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/20/2012 7:27:00 AM
Thanks Rollo, I hope you come back to read it. Take care.

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