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Heavy Trains My Life has been a song of heavy trains, not rails or trams that ride below the street. A move that in your gut of gut does reign as you sense the force to come down in your feet. My life has been the song of steel on steel and trains have carried tired heads held high. As they approached I heard the air brakes squeal and at that sound I felt my hopes were nigh. My heart has oft been stirred by a train’s roar the sound of which fired love up in my breast. These trains move on and then are seen no more and leave to show this love was not the best. I know quite well the song of heavy trains, whose whistles wail of woe and loss and pain. 9/25/19 STRAND SPECIAL 10 Sponsor: Brian Strand

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Date: 12/29/2019 8:41:00 AM
A wonderful extension of The Little Engine That Could.
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Date: 11/20/2019 5:59:00 PM
Congrats on your win Janis
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Date: 11/20/2019 3:55:00 PM
Janis congratulations on your win in my writing challenge. Great image !
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Date: 9/26/2019 7:24:00 AM
Darling sonnet. This should do well in this contest!
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Date: 9/26/2019 1:24:00 AM
You had me from the first line. Love this. This is a FAV for me.
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Date: 9/25/2019 10:31:00 PM
This is a wonderful poem and perfect for the contest. I love it. God bless you
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Date: 9/25/2019 10:00:00 PM
This effort is beautiful. Great language within, and great fluidity. WOW! I could only desire for a long and continuous-time to be able to write this good, friend should I say this again, or did I say that I felt this to be a beautiful and fulfilling effort!
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