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Heaven's Lullaby

soaring high and free guided by the glowing sun beauty swirls gracefully. the sky is her stage birds sing, clouds slow dance life thrives below her. she was created by love ten tiny fingers ten tiny toes. her blue eyes sparkled a wisdom and truth far beyond her tender age. innocent and pure she radiated strength her touch sheer bliss. she knew no words yet in that cute smile her faith spoke clearly. her spirit was strong she fought courageously as only a wee one knows. within the sun's illuminating glow life passed through it's essence her fragile body floated free. heaven's lullaby beckoned softly her small precious soul. heaven's lullaby rocks gently her sweet song of peace. reworked 08-16-2016 with gratitude to the Poet who encouraged me.

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James Inman

Date: 8/21/2019 8:02:00 AM

So beautiful.

Casarah Nance

Date: 4/17/2017 11:30:00 AM

soft and beautifully written. :)

Lisa Ricci

Date: 4/12/2017 4:08:00 PM

Hello Lynn. This is a lullaby. So graceful and elegant. The words are gentle and very calming. There is much beauty within this entry. Be proud of your creation and imagery. Well done entirely.

Emile Pinet

Date: 3/31/2017 9:51:00 PM

This is very sad and so well penned. A very human touch to this poem, that tugs at the heart strings, Emile.

Vladislav Raven

Date: 3/14/2017 12:05:00 PM

Hi Lynn, Such a sad yet very beautiful write Lynn. This came straight from the heart and my tears fell as i did read. I was caught amidst the beautiful sadness painted on the canvas. Your journey through poetry rises and rises Lynn. This is a definite seven and a fave. Hugs....Mike. XX

Phil Capitano

Date: 9/12/2016 6:41:00 AM

Such beauty in sadness, Lynn, can only come from a soul that has been touched by grace. Well done.

Mike Hauser

Date: 8/26/2016 8:10:00 AM

You write so beautifully!

Robert Pettit

Date: 8/23/2016 11:58:00 PM

How pleasant to read!

Lynn Marie
Date: 8/24/2016 1:37:00 PM

..thank you for stopping by :-)

John Fleming

Date: 8/22/2016 4:59:00 PM

Most poignant, Lynn Marie...Really quite lovely! My best regards. :) john

Lynn Marie
Date: 8/24/2016 1:36:00 PM

thank you so much..i appreciate your kind words and visit :-)

Jan Allison

Date: 8/22/2016 7:01:00 AM

Heartbreakingly beautiful Lynn - such an emotional write I had a huge lump in my throat reading your tender lines:-) hugs Jan xx

Lynn Marie
Date: 8/22/2016 2:11:00 PM

..thank you so much Jan..your encouragement and kindness means a lot to me :-)

Aiyah Torres

Date: 8/21/2016 3:52:00 PM

Lynn.. this is surprisingly beautiful!!! I love it :) Thank you for reading some of my poems.. It made me smile whenever I saw your comment in my inbox :) I hope to witness more of this beauty ^_^ Loves, Aiyah

Lynn Marie
Date: 8/21/2016 4:10:00 PM

hi..I am thrilled you stopped by..so happy you are back :-) I love love your writing..thank you :-)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/21/2016 11:36:00 AM

- Heartbreaking beautiful, Lynn Marie :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Lynn Marie
Date: 8/21/2016 2:15:00 PM

..I appreciate "your sunshine"very much..enjoy a lovely day :-)

Bl Devnath

Date: 8/20/2016 11:04:00 AM

A heart touching poem filled pure emotion my friend. While reading this beautiful poem i felt soaring my mind high in the sky to touch the beauty of Heaven. Feeling you are a beautiful angel. My favorite. Hugs, Cloudy poet, bl

Lynn Marie
Date: 8/20/2016 6:27:00 PM

..what a lovely comment...thank you so much for visiting...and always being a ray of sunshine :-)

Arthur Vaso

Date: 8/19/2016 11:35:00 PM

I really enjoyed reading this poem, it was very heartwarming.

Lynn Marie
Date: 8/20/2016 1:01:00 AM

You have a generous heart..I appreciate your kind words and friendly visit :-)

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 8/19/2016 8:53:00 AM

Good morning.

Lynn Marie
Date: 8/19/2016 10:42:00 PM

...happy friday :-)

Paul Callus

Date: 8/18/2016 5:40:00 PM

Full marks to this beautiful, touching poem, Lynn. Very much inspired. Regards // paul

Lynn Marie
Date: 8/19/2016 12:55:00 PM

thank you so much for your kind words and time in visiting :-)

Beverly Read

Date: 8/18/2016 12:07:00 PM

My heart lurched when I realized where this was going. Beautifully described and so touching.

Lynn Marie
Date: 8/18/2016 12:14:00 PM

..thank you so much for your kind words and the visit :-)

Joe Dimino

Date: 8/18/2016 9:01:00 AM

Beautiful writing!!

Lynn Marie
Date: 8/18/2016 11:46:00 AM

...thank you for your kind words and visit :-)

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 8/18/2016 7:44:00 AM

It is my pleasure Lynn.

Lynn Marie
Date: 8/18/2016 11:45:00 AM

:-)

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 8/18/2016 6:48:00 AM

A deeply moving beautifully sad poem that touched my heart and wet my eyes Lynn! 7 ; )

Lynn Marie
Date: 8/18/2016 7:43:00 AM

i am touched by your kind words connie...thank you for the encouragement and lovely visit...I admire and appreciate you greatly..your writing is wonderfully inspiring :-)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/17/2016 3:58:00 PM

Sad but sweet. What an angel!

Lynn Marie
Date: 8/17/2016 6:23:00 PM

..thank you very much...your kindness and visits are appreciated :-)

Chris Hagy

Date: 8/17/2016 1:37:00 PM

Beautiful write Lynn:)

Lynn Marie
Date: 8/17/2016 6:17:00 PM

thank you chris, I am always happy you visit :-)

Vladislav Raven

Date: 8/17/2016 10:48:00 AM

HI Lynn, this is a sad and so beautiful write. I write this comment through the tears that fall. Beauty and content such as this could not help but touch the heart. The emotions stir deep within. This has to be a seven and a fave Lynn. Hugs....Mike. XX

Lynn Marie
Date: 8/17/2016 6:15:00 PM

..you are too kind..i appreciate you and your lovely visits..thank you :-)

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 8/17/2016 3:09:00 AM

I'm so glad you reposted this one. Judging by the responses so far the others also appreciate your artistry. A 7.

Lynn Marie
Date: 8/17/2016 6:11:00 PM

..i greatly appreciate you, your encouragement, your kind words and visits..thank you very much :-)

Alexis Y.

Date: 8/16/2016 8:38:00 PM

Hi Lynn Marie, I agree with Tim this is a sad yet beautiful piece. This well written write brought tears to my eyes. A without a doubt seven:-) Alexis

Lynn Marie
Date: 8/17/2016 6:05:00 PM

thank you so much for your kind words and visits :-)