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Heaven Waits

Oh, how I come alive in pleasured zone
when passion sears my flesh, flays to bone
Euphoria soars then bursts in rainbowed hue
the universe is made of me and you

your fingers scorch me in their blazing flame
You set each longing free: unchaste, untame 
to dominate, you tie my every dream
then give and get your pleasure in extreme

we're bonded in the essence of desire
no other thought but how to quench the fire
Surrender brings release from frenzied pace
I see the glow of love here on your face

They say that heaven waits for those who love
When I'm with you I'm taken up above

Eileen Manassian
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Lindley Avatar
January 1, 2017 at 10:02 AM
MY FRIEND,NOBODY DOES HOT, HOT ROMANCE AS DO YOU! This one is sizzling and an image feast inspiring one, to give cause to us to remember our own such encounters(if we have been so wildly blessed!)... ADDED TO MY FAV LIST...
Downing  Avatar
December 14, 2016 at 8:47 AM
It's electrifying... Hot, passion, romance and mesmerizingly beautiful!
Manassian Avatar
December 18, 2016 at 8:55 PM
Thank you, dear. Very kind of you to visit. :)
Lamoureux Avatar
December 13, 2016 at 3:23 PM
Feel free to drop by, there are a three or four you might like. I am well, busy but in a good way.
Manassian Avatar
December 18, 2016 at 8:56 PM
I'm glad your busy in a good way...Hugs, dear.
Lamoureux Avatar
December 12, 2016 at 8:27 AM
Ooh la la hot! I think after reading this one all the snow has melted off the roof of my house.
Manassian Avatar
December 12, 2016 at 12:59 PM
:) Need to come up with another one to melt the snow on the driveway! ;) What a sweet comment, Richard. How have you been? I've missed you....
Sathasivam Avatar
December 11, 2016 at 2:36 AM
Beautiful romance in this sonnet. Beautiful write. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it.
Manassian Avatar
December 12, 2016 at 1:13 PM
Thank you, Ravi. You are always kind with your comments.
Turner Avatar
December 9, 2016 at 8:37 AM
Intensely romantic, Eilene. Very HOT!!!
Manassian Avatar
December 18, 2016 at 8:56 PM
The hotter, the better! :) Thanks, Daniel.
Andresen Avatar
December 9, 2016 at 4:54 AM
- Romantic and beautiful ... 7 - a gem, dear Eileen - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Manassian Avatar
December 18, 2016 at 8:59 PM
Love you, sweetie. Thank you for visiting my work. Hugs
Parker Avatar
December 8, 2016 at 9:11 PM
Only someone with supreme passion understands the world you've painted, its a gift and a curse not everyone has, but those that do find the world is alive in ways only a poem like this can discribe
Manassian Avatar
December 18, 2016 at 9:04 PM
A gift and a curse it certainly is, Frederic. You certainly know this well. Thank you for this lovely response to my poem.
Y. Avatar
December 8, 2016 at 8:41 PM
WoW! Eileen, this is sooo romantic. It was oozing with passion and desire as well. You are so good at these kind of writes. "Queen Of Passion suits you well. A without a doubt seven:-) Alexis
Manassian Avatar
December 18, 2016 at 9:09 PM
A double seven!!! I'm so honored, dear. Wow. Thank you for finding this to your liking....Hugs
Wolf Avatar
December 8, 2016 at 6:40 PM
Such romance in this sonnet, Eileen! Beautifully done
Manassian Avatar
December 8, 2016 at 7:22 PM
Thanks, Rick. Passion and Romance give my life....
Wanter Avatar
December 8, 2016 at 6:37 PM
Wow! I was taken up above, too!
Manassian Avatar
December 8, 2016 at 7:22 PM
Glad you liked it, Sunlite. Words can never do passion justice...it just burns. :) Thanks for the visit.
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