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Heaven Waits

Oh, how I come alive in pleasured zone
when passion sears my flesh, flays to bone
Euphoria soars then bursts in rainbowed hue
the universe is made of me and you

your fingers scorch me in their blazing flame
You set each longing free: unchaste, untame 
to dominate, you tie my every dream
then give and get your pleasure in extreme

we're bonded in the essence of desire
no other thought but how to quench the fire
Surrender brings release from frenzied pace
I see the glow of love here on your face

They say that heaven waits for those who love
When I'm with you I'm taken up above

Eileen Manassian

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Robert Lindley Date: 1/1/2017 10:02:00 AM MY FRIEND,NOBODY DOES HOT, HOT ROMANCE AS DO YOU! This one is sizzling and an image feast inspiring one, to give cause to us to remember our own such encounters(if we have been so wildly blessed!)... ADDED TO MY FAV LIST... Login to Reply

Akkina Downing Date: 12/14/2016 8:47:00 AM It's electrifying... Hot, passion, romance and mesmerizingly beautiful! Login to Reply Eileen Manassian Date: 12/18/2016 8:55:00 PM Thank you, dear. Very kind of you to visit. :)

Richard Lamoureux Date: 12/13/2016 3:23:00 PM Feel free to drop by, there are a three or four you might like. I am well, busy but in a good way. Login to Reply Eileen Manassian Date: 12/18/2016 8:56:00 PM I'm glad your busy in a good way...Hugs, dear.

Richard Lamoureux Date: 12/12/2016 8:27:00 AM Ooh la la hot! I think after reading this one all the snow has melted off the roof of my house. Login to Reply Eileen Manassian Date: 12/12/2016 12:59:00 PM :) Need to come up with another one to melt the snow on the driveway! ;) What a sweet comment, Richard. How have you been? I've missed you....

Ravi Sathasivam Date: 12/11/2016 2:36:00 AM Beautiful romance in this sonnet. Beautiful write. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it. Login to Reply Eileen Manassian Date: 12/12/2016 1:13:00 PM Thank you, Ravi. You are always kind with your comments.

Daniel Turner Date: 12/9/2016 8:37:00 AM Intensely romantic, Eilene. Very HOT!!! Login to Reply Eileen Manassian Date: 12/18/2016 8:56:00 PM The hotter, the better! :) Thanks, Daniel.

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 12/9/2016 4:54:00 AM - Romantic and beautiful ... 7 - a gem, dear Eileen - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply Eileen Manassian Date: 12/18/2016 8:59:00 PM Love you, sweetie. Thank you for visiting my work. Hugs

Frederic Parker Date: 12/8/2016 9:11:00 PM Only someone with supreme passion understands the world you've painted, its a gift and a curse not everyone has, but those that do find the world is alive in ways only a poem like this can discribe Login to Reply Eileen Manassian Date: 12/18/2016 9:04:00 PM A gift and a curse it certainly is, Frederic. You certainly know this well. Thank you for this lovely response to my poem.

Alexis Y. Date: 12/8/2016 8:41:00 PM WoW! Eileen, this is sooo romantic. It was oozing with passion and desire as well. You are so good at these kind of writes. "Queen Of Passion suits you well. A without a doubt seven:-) Alexis Login to Reply Eileen Manassian Date: 12/18/2016 9:09:00 PM A double seven!!! I'm so honored, dear. Wow. Thank you for finding this to your liking....Hugs

White Wolf Date: 12/8/2016 6:40:00 PM Such romance in this sonnet, Eileen! Beautifully done Login to Reply Eileen Manassian Date: 12/8/2016 7:22:00 PM Thanks, Rick. Passion and Romance give my life....

Sunlite Wanter Date: 12/8/2016 6:37:00 PM Wow! I was taken up above, too! Login to Reply Eileen Manassian Date: 12/8/2016 7:22:00 PM Glad you liked it, Sunlite. Words can never do passion justice...it just burns. :) Thanks for the visit.