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Heaven Sent - Tim Smith and Seren

Written by Tim Smith and Seren Roberts Across the room I slowly walk Hips swaying, smile in place Sensually I use my body to talk Holding out my hands to touch his face Here she comes, walking my way Beauty and grace, with a smile in place Look at her swing, look at her sway Oh how I want to kiss that sweet face Gently I bring his face close to mine Looked into his eyes, desire written there Hungrily kiss his lips, they feel divine I stroke his neck, ruffling his hair She pulls me in, much to my surprise Aromatic perfume, she's heaven sent Glow to her face, twinkle in her eyes Her touches so sweet, I must be a gent Crooking my finger he follows at last I wait til his body is close to mine Slowly I turn, my heart beating fast Look on his face is saying all is fine. Following close when she calls to me Feelings so strong, feelings so right My heart beating fast, she sets me free Our heat steaming up, on this brisk night Just goes to prove with a smile and a sway A gal can entice a guy in a seductive way

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 10/14/2014 8:47:00 PM
That is true! Congratulations to you both.
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Seren Roberts
Date: 10/16/2014 12:44:00 AM
Thanks Richard, from us both ...Seren
Date: 10/14/2014 5:54:00 PM
Congratulations Tim and Seren on your win.
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Seren Roberts
Date: 10/16/2014 12:45:00 AM
Thanks Maurice for your congrats....Seren and Tim
Date: 10/14/2014 1:01:00 PM
many congrats Seren and Tim great collaboration congrats on your honourable mention:-) hugs jan xxx
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Jan Allison
Date: 10/16/2014 3:12:00 AM
He is a joy to work with Seren:-) hugs jan xx
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Seren Roberts
Date: 10/16/2014 12:46:00 AM
Hi Jan, was a pleasure to work with Tim....Seren
Date: 10/14/2014 12:27:00 PM
- A kind word costs nothing and is still the most beautiful gift of all: Congratulations, Seren ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/8/2014 12:36:00 PM
Just read this romantic poem on Tim's posts, so it was only fair that I visit yours as well, Seren! Compliments to both of you. You accomplished what you set out to do...seduction! // paul (a 7 rating)
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Seren Roberts
Date: 10/8/2014 1:04:00 PM
Thank you Paul.....Seren
Date: 10/7/2014 3:51:00 PM
Hey hey hey, it's poem of the day? that is really neat, so congratulations. This is nice collaborating . You guys complement each other very well, and you've got some great rhyme in it and the ending says it all!!
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Seren Roberts
Date: 10/7/2014 7:33:00 PM
Hi Andrea thx for stopping by, was a fun write for us both.......Seren
Date: 10/6/2014 5:55:00 PM
Great poem. Congrats on the poem of the day.
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Seren Roberts
Date: 10/7/2014 7:34:00 PM
Thx Matthew ...Seren
Date: 10/6/2014 1:08:00 PM
- Congratulations Serene & Tim on the poem of the day !!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Seren Roberts
Date: 10/6/2014 4:28:00 PM
Thanks Anne Lise was a pleasure to work with Tim....Seren
Date: 10/6/2014 12:28:00 PM
Congrats on this sizzler you two....
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Seren Roberts
Date: 10/6/2014 4:29:00 PM
Thank you so much Eileen....Seren
Date: 10/6/2014 11:44:00 AM
congrats Tim and Seren wonderful to see this as poem of the day:-) hugs Jan xx
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Seren Roberts
Date: 10/6/2014 4:30:00 PM
Was a lovely surprise,.... seren
Date: 10/6/2014 9:51:00 AM
Congratulations Serene and Tim on the poem of the day! Verlena
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Seren Roberts
Date: 10/6/2014 4:30:00 PM
May I say thank you for the two of us....Seren
Date: 10/6/2014 9:16:00 AM
congratulations!!!! This is the most romantic poem I ever read!!
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Tim Smith
Date: 10/6/2014 1:25:00 PM
Thank You Martha from both Seren and myself...hugs Tim
Date: 10/6/2014 2:12:00 AM
congratulations on poem of the day truly beautifully penned piece serene well done
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Seren Roberts
Date: 10/6/2014 4:32:00 PM
Hi Liam was because of Tim it was so easy to write....thank you ....Seren
Date: 10/6/2014 1:59:00 AM
!!!!CONGRATULATIONS!!!! On being the poem for the next 24hrs. I loved it the first time and I love it now.
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Tim Smith
Date: 10/6/2014 1:24:00 PM
Thanks Maurice...It takes two people to replace you :)
Date: 10/4/2014 11:38:00 PM
This poem is beautiful . The collaboration creates a sexual tension that might not otherwise exist.The other plus is since you are collaborating on the Internet and not actually together. You can take separate cold showers after the write. Great poem!
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Seren Roberts
Date: 10/4/2014 11:56:00 PM
Lol Maurice only you could think of that......Seren
Date: 10/4/2014 10:33:00 PM
Oh My Thank you Tim, I warned you I looked good in a dress!!!!! Great write guys!
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Seren Roberts
Date: 10/4/2014 11:55:00 PM
Thank you my friend for stopping by and commenting, made me smile......Seren
Date: 10/4/2014 8:08:00 PM
I love it. I agree with Jan, it is so fantastic with the two perspectives. Brilliant work you two.
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Seren Roberts
Date: 10/4/2014 10:31:00 PM
Thank you Brenda, Tim is a dream to work with, was so lucky he agreed to partner me.....Seren
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Tim Smith
Date: 10/4/2014 8:44:00 PM
Thanks Brenda...Seren did all the hard work....I just enjoyed the ride.....hugs Tom
Date: 10/4/2014 5:56:00 PM
oh women are very clever indeed! I love the way you have written this from a male and female perspective - Fabulous write my friends:-) hugs Jan xxx
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Tim Smith
Date: 10/4/2014 8:42:00 PM
You two are trying to get on my nice list :) .....hugs Tim
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Jan Allison
Date: 10/4/2014 6:01:00 PM
I agree Seren he is so easy to work with - Casarah should count herself so lucky - he is very generous in his praise too:-) hugs Jan xxx
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Seren Roberts
Date: 10/4/2014 5:58:00 PM
Thanks Jan was a laugh todo....Tim is great to work with....Seren
Date: 10/4/2014 5:56:00 PM
I am favouring this gem..Wow you two should collab more often..So so romantic!!
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Tim Smith
Date: 10/4/2014 8:40:00 PM
Thanks Charma....Seren is brilliant and such a joy to write with...hugs Tim
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Seren Roberts
Date: 10/4/2014 6:04:00 PM
Thank you Charmaine, we have done a collab before its in my poem list called Passion rises as Waterfalls....Seren

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