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Heaven Sent - Tim Smith and Seren

Written by Tim Smith and Seren Roberts

Across the room I slowly walk 
Hips swaying, smile in place 
Sensually I use my body to talk 
Holding out my hands to touch his face 

Here she comes, walking my way 
Beauty and grace, with a smile in place 
Look at her swing, look at her sway 
Oh how I want to kiss that sweet face 

Gently I bring his face close to mine 
Looked into his eyes, desire written there 
Hungrily kiss his lips, they feel divine 
I stroke his neck, ruffling his hair 

She pulls me in, much to my surprise 
Aromatic perfume, she's heaven sent 
Glow to her face, twinkle in her eyes 
Her touches so sweet, I must be a gent 

Crooking my finger he follows at last 
I wait til his body is close to mine 
Slowly I turn, my heart beating fast 
Look on his face is saying all is fine. 

Following close when she calls to me 
Feelings so strong, feelings so right 
My heart beating fast, she sets me free 
Our heat steaming up, on this brisk night

Just goes to prove with a smile and a sway
A gal can entice a guy in a seductive way

Copyright © Seren Roberts | Year Posted 2014

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Richard Lamoureux Date: 10/14/2014 8:47:00 PM That is true! Congratulations to you both. Login to Reply Seren Roberts Date: 10/16/2014 12:44:00 AM Thanks Richard, from us both ...Seren

Maurice Yvonne Date: 10/14/2014 5:54:00 PM Congratulations Tim and Seren on your win. Login to Reply Seren Roberts Date: 10/16/2014 12:45:00 AM Thanks Maurice for your congrats....Seren and Tim

Jan Allison Date: 10/14/2014 1:01:00 PM many congrats Seren and Tim great collaboration congrats on your honourable mention:-) hugs jan xxx Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 10/16/2014 3:12:00 AM He is a joy to work with Seren:-) hugs jan xx Seren Roberts Date: 10/16/2014 12:46:00 AM Hi Jan, was a pleasure to work with Tim....Seren

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 10/14/2014 12:27:00 PM - A kind word costs nothing and is still the most beautiful gift of all: Congratulations, Seren ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply

Paul Callus Date: 10/8/2014 12:36:00 PM Just read this romantic poem on Tim's posts, so it was only fair that I visit yours as well, Seren! Compliments to both of you. You accomplished what you set out to do...seduction! // paul (a 7 rating) Login to Reply Seren Roberts Date: 10/8/2014 1:04:00 PM Thank you Paul.....Seren

Andrea Dietrich Date: 10/7/2014 3:51:00 PM Hey hey hey, it's poem of the day? that is really neat, so congratulations. This is nice collaborating . You guys complement each other very well, and you've got some great rhyme in it and the ending says it all!! Login to Reply Seren Roberts Date: 10/7/2014 7:33:00 PM Hi Andrea thx for stopping by, was a fun write for us both.......Seren

Matthew Horstkotter Date: 10/6/2014 5:55:00 PM Great poem. Congrats on the poem of the day. Login to Reply Seren Roberts Date: 10/7/2014 7:34:00 PM Thx Matthew ...Seren

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 10/6/2014 1:08:00 PM - Congratulations Serene & Tim on the poem of the day !!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply Seren Roberts Date: 10/6/2014 4:28:00 PM Thanks Anne Lise was a pleasure to work with Tim....Seren

Eileen Manassian Date: 10/6/2014 12:28:00 PM Congrats on this sizzler you two.... Login to Reply Seren Roberts Date: 10/6/2014 4:29:00 PM Thank you so much Eileen....Seren

Jan Allison Date: 10/6/2014 11:44:00 AM congrats Tim and Seren wonderful to see this as poem of the day:-) hugs Jan xx Login to Reply Seren Roberts Date: 10/6/2014 4:30:00 PM Was a lovely surprise,.... seren

Verlena S. Walker Date: 10/6/2014 9:51:00 AM Congratulations Serene and Tim on the poem of the day! Verlena Login to Reply Seren Roberts Date: 10/6/2014 4:30:00 PM May I say thank you for the two of us....Seren

Martha Jonas Date: 10/6/2014 9:16:00 AM congratulations!!!! This is the most romantic poem I ever read!! Login to Reply Tim Smith Date: 10/6/2014 1:25:00 PM Thank You Martha from both Seren and myself...hugs Tim

Liam Mcdaid Date: 10/6/2014 2:12:00 AM congratulations on poem of the day truly beautifully penned piece serene well done Login to Reply Seren Roberts Date: 10/6/2014 4:32:00 PM Hi Liam was because of Tim it was so easy to write....thank you ....Seren

Maurice Yvonne Date: 10/6/2014 1:59:00 AM !!!!CONGRATULATIONS!!!! On being the poem for the next 24hrs. I loved it the first time and I love it now. Login to Reply Tim Smith Date: 10/6/2014 1:24:00 PM Thanks Maurice...It takes two people to replace you :)

Maurice Yvonne Date: 10/4/2014 11:38:00 PM This poem is beautiful . The collaboration creates a sexual tension that might not otherwise exist.The other plus is since you are collaborating on the Internet and not actually together. You can take separate cold showers after the write. Great poem! Login to Reply Seren Roberts Date: 10/4/2014 11:56:00 PM Lol Maurice only you could think of that......Seren

Arthur Vaso Date: 10/4/2014 10:33:00 PM Oh My Thank you Tim, I warned you I looked good in a dress!!!!! Great write guys! Login to Reply Seren Roberts Date: 10/4/2014 11:55:00 PM Thank you my friend for stopping by and commenting, made me smile......Seren

Brenda Meier-Hans Date: 10/4/2014 8:08:00 PM I love it. I agree with Jan, it is so fantastic with the two perspectives. Brilliant work you two. Login to Reply Seren Roberts Date: 10/4/2014 10:31:00 PM Thank you Brenda, Tim is a dream to work with, was so lucky he agreed to partner me.....Seren Tim Smith Date: 10/4/2014 8:44:00 PM Thanks Brenda...Seren did all the hard work....I just enjoyed the ride.....hugs Tom

Jan Allison Date: 10/4/2014 5:56:00 PM oh women are very clever indeed! I love the way you have written this from a male and female perspective - Fabulous write my friends:-) hugs Jan xxx Login to Reply Tim Smith Date: 10/4/2014 8:42:00 PM You two are trying to get on my nice list :) .....hugs Tim Jan Allison Date: 10/4/2014 6:01:00 PM I agree Seren he is so easy to work with - Casarah should count herself so lucky - he is very generous in his praise too:-) hugs Jan xxx Seren Roberts Date: 10/4/2014 5:58:00 PM Thanks Jan was a laugh todo....Tim is great to work with....Seren

Charmaine Chircop Date: 10/4/2014 5:56:00 PM I am favouring this gem..Wow you two should collab more often..So so romantic!! Login to Reply Tim Smith Date: 10/4/2014 8:40:00 PM Thanks Charma....Seren is brilliant and such a joy to write with...hugs Tim Seren Roberts Date: 10/4/2014 6:04:00 PM Thank you Charmaine, we have done a collab before its in my poem list called Passion rises as Waterfalls....Seren