Heaven

**************************** To rest in peace A dream shall come to lovely light... To rest in peace Relentless pain shall surely cease... In my faith, a promise of sight Shall lead to love without a fight To rest in peace... **************************** A Dr. Ram Mehta Contest

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Dinda Minardi

Date: 8/12/2011 12:17:00 PM

Greatly written. Simple but inspirational. Congrats!

Kash Poet

Date: 8/1/2011 1:26:00 PM

Beautiful poem ....Congrats Rick on your win.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/1/2011 10:52:00 AM

Congratulations on your poem placing in Dr. Ram Mehta's " Rondelet" contest ^Rick. Love, Carol

David Williams

Date: 8/1/2011 8:38:00 AM

hey Rick, congrats on your win,David

Joyce Johnson

Date: 7/31/2011 8:39:00 PM

Lovely poem and win. congratulations Rick. Love, Joyce

John Freeman

Date: 7/31/2011 8:17:00 PM

Rick, great to see your poem honored in third place. Agape, Moses

Jun-Jun Villanueva

Date: 7/31/2011 6:22:00 PM

CONGRATULATIONS ~~~~smile for the sweet great placement in Dr. Ram's Rondelet contest. . .. ~~~~*-*junjun

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 7/31/2011 5:07:00 PM

So happy to see this terrific poem ranking high, Rick. Congratulations! Love, Carolyn

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 7/31/2011 4:56:00 PM

Congrats Rick on your grand third place win with these wonderful words of poetic art my friend..thankxx for the yahoo too.. awesome..luv..

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/31/2011 4:02:00 PM

VERy nice, Rick. I see why he picked it for a top place! Congratulations.

Jack Horne

Date: 7/31/2011 3:55:00 PM

Many congrats, Rick : )

Caryl Ramsdale

Date: 7/31/2011 2:23:00 PM

A Ronelet Contest Congratulations! Very well done. Caryl

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 7/31/2011 2:01:00 PM

My congratulations on the third place win in my contest,

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/22/2011 7:57:00 AM

I enjoyed reading your poetry this morning ^Rick. Keep that pen flowing and keep sharing your excellent poetry with the world. Wishing you a wonderful weekend and may it bring you added inspiration as it sails along. Love, Carol

Lee Ramage

Date: 7/21/2011 7:59:00 PM

Beautiful poem. Lee

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 7/21/2011 6:13:00 PM

Thanks for the entry, Rick

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 7/21/2011 3:55:00 PM

Exactly how I feel about death, Rick. It's just a transition to a better place where we can "rest i peace." Just think of a world with no pain! Excellent entry for Dr. Ram's contest and I'm sending winning wishes to you. Love, Carolyn