Heaven

Harps melodious tunes, Harmony be our life, Humility our soul, Healing Mercy for us, Heirs are we to God's bliss, Happy our destiny, Holy the place for us.

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/1/2023 9:41:00 PM

I hope this heavenly Pleiades got a win. Wonderful job, Victor

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 10/1/2023 4:30:00 AM

such a spiritual and well-written Pleiades. You inspire me to try my hand at writing one. Awesome job, Victor.

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 9/11/2023 3:20:00 PM

A lovely short spiritual write Victor. :)

Ministryofdreams Daisy Silk

Date: 9/7/2023 8:53:00 PM

Truly a beautiful and harmonious poem and love the structure of this piece.

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 9/5/2023 4:08:00 AM

Wonderful write. Love it. I did heavenly too but didn't see yours until I'd already posted one. Love this. God bless you. Love, Gina

Sotto Poet

Date: 9/3/2023 2:39:00 PM

Dear friend, your thoughts are truly a work of art. The way you have woven the letter 'H' into your words has transported us to a realm of enchantment, where heaven itself seems to have unfolded before our eyes. The beauty that emanates from the depths of your magnanimous soul, is simply awe-inspiring. I send you warm embraces and my sincerest wishes for an ongoing recovery and improved wellbeing.

Sally Eslinger

Date: 9/2/2023 5:59:00 PM

This brought me sweet tears, Victor! Your love for God with love written! Gless you! My hugs, sally

Ink Empress

Date: 9/2/2023 6:19:00 AM

A mellifluous write. I really love the way you’ve written this. And I’ve never tried this form but seems very creative. Stunning wordplay and flow

Speaks Volumes

Date: 8/31/2023 3:49:00 AM

This is nice one Victor. You did well to designate all those H words to heaven.

Susan Lawrence

Date: 8/30/2023 7:24:00 AM

Unfurled beauty coming from within your kind and generous soul dear Victor . Sending hugs and continued improved health . Susan :)

Joanna Daniel

Date: 8/29/2023 8:14:00 AM

Simply brilliant, Victor:)

Judy Ball

Date: 8/29/2023 1:31:00 AM

I really love this. So true. As always just lovely. God Bless, JB

Joe Dimino

Date: 8/28/2023 3:18:00 PM

Firmly reassuring. As Christ said, "lukewarm and I will spit you out" -- but devout in your commitment to God's eternal abiding Love, and you will never know a barren moment in the Kingdom of heaven.

Mike Gentile

Date: 8/25/2023 4:26:00 AM

Seems that heaven in minds of men is always a thing of beauty! Your lovely portrait is no exception! A wonderful write!

Aysha Nuwas

Date: 8/25/2023 12:37:00 AM

I love this and a thought that has been on my mind, lovely poem.

Janice Canerdy

Date: 8/23/2023 8:45:00 AM

Wonderful description of Heaven, Victor! I'll see you there! Janice

Lisa Ricci

Date: 8/23/2023 4:51:00 AM

Dear Victor. Hello. Welcome Back Welcome Back Welcome Back. Your creativity and your skills shine within your words and execution. You allow the reader to pause. As always, thank you for sharing your amazing talent. Have a beautiful afternoon now and always. Love Peace and Blessings always too. (smile)

Michael Tor

Date: 8/22/2023 9:11:00 PM

Love this Victor a favorite my friend wishing someday to see you there. God bless you... A favorite

Eve Roper

Date: 8/22/2023 7:49:00 PM

inspirational and meaningful

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 8/22/2023 5:34:00 PM

A beautiful Pleiades poem Victor, heavenly words… Belle

Jan Allison

Date: 8/22/2023 3:52:00 PM

a heavenly pleiades indeed Victor:-) hugs Jan xx

M. L. Kiser

Date: 8/22/2023 12:23:00 PM

This has wonderful flow and beautiful thoughts. Well done.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/22/2023 5:04:00 AM

I am sure that the place is too wonderful and beautiful to describe in human terms but you have done a good job with what we have available in human words. Thanks for sharing and for stopping by my page. Sara

Tom Cunningham

Date: 8/22/2023 3:32:00 AM

You discribed it well Victor. Tom

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 8/22/2023 3:00:00 AM

May we all be ready to reach His Holiest of places ones day Victor, but until then, may we find heaven in each others comforting words, Be blessed, know that I'm here :)