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Heaven

Harps melodious tunes,
                        Harmony be our life,
                    Humility our soul,
                 Healing Mercy for us,
           Heirs are we to God's bliss,
      Happy our destiny,
Holy the place for us.

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Andrea Dietrich Date: 10/1/2023 9:41:00 PM I hope this heavenly Pleiades got a win. Wonderful job, Victor Login to Reply

Linda Alice Fowler Date: 9/11/2023 3:20:00 PM A lovely short spiritual write Victor. :) Login to Reply

Ministryofdreams Daisy Silk Date: 9/7/2023 8:53:00 PM Truly a beautiful and harmonious poem and love the structure of this piece. Login to Reply

Regina Mcintosh Date: 9/5/2023 4:08:00 AM Wonderful write. Love it. I did heavenly too but didn't see yours until I'd already posted one. Love this. God bless you. Love, Gina Login to Reply

Sotto Poet Date: 9/3/2023 2:39:00 PM Dear friend, your thoughts are truly a work of art. The way you have woven the letter 'H' into your words has transported us to a realm of enchantment, where heaven itself seems to have unfolded before our eyes. The beauty that emanates from the depths of your magnanimous soul, is simply awe-inspiring. I send you warm embraces and my sincerest wishes for an ongoing recovery and improved wellbeing. Login to Reply

Sally Eslinger Date: 9/2/2023 5:59:00 PM This brought me sweet tears, Victor! Your love for God with love written! Gless you! My hugs, sally Login to Reply

Ink Empress Date: 9/2/2023 6:19:00 AM A mellifluous write. I really love the way you’ve written this. And I’ve never tried this form but seems very creative. Stunning wordplay and flow Login to Reply

Speaks Volumes Date: 8/31/2023 3:49:00 AM This is nice one Victor. You did well to designate all those H words to heaven. Login to Reply

Susan Lawrence Date: 8/30/2023 7:24:00 AM Unfurled beauty coming from within your kind and generous soul dear Victor . Sending hugs and continued improved health . Susan :) Login to Reply

Joanna Daniel Date: 8/29/2023 8:14:00 AM Simply brilliant, Victor:) Login to Reply

Judy Ball Date: 8/29/2023 1:31:00 AM I really love this. So true. As always just lovely. God Bless, JB Login to Reply

Joe Dimino Date: 8/28/2023 3:18:00 PM Firmly reassuring. As Christ said, "lukewarm and I will spit you out" -- but devout in your commitment to God's eternal abiding Love, and you will never know a barren moment in the Kingdom of heaven. Login to Reply

Mike Gentile Date: 8/25/2023 4:26:00 AM Seems that heaven in minds of men is always a thing of beauty! Your lovely portrait is no exception! A wonderful write! Login to Reply

Aysha Nuwas Date: 8/25/2023 12:37:00 AM I love this and a thought that has been on my mind, lovely poem. Login to Reply

Janice Canerdy Date: 8/23/2023 8:45:00 AM Wonderful description of Heaven, Victor! I'll see you there! Janice Login to Reply

Lisa Ricci Date: 8/23/2023 4:51:00 AM Dear Victor. Hello. Welcome Back Welcome Back Welcome Back. Your creativity and your skills shine within your words and execution. You allow the reader to pause. As always, thank you for sharing your amazing talent. Have a beautiful afternoon now and always. Love Peace and Blessings always too. (smile) Login to Reply

Michael Tor Date: 8/22/2023 9:11:00 PM Love this Victor a favorite my friend wishing someday to see you there. God bless you... A favorite Login to Reply

Eve Roper Date: 8/22/2023 7:49:00 PM inspirational and meaningful Login to Reply

Beryl Edmonds Date: 8/22/2023 5:34:00 PM A beautiful Pleiades poem Victor, heavenly words… Belle Login to Reply

Jan Allison Date: 8/22/2023 3:52:00 PM a heavenly pleiades indeed Victor:-) hugs Jan xx Login to Reply

M. L. Kiser Date: 8/22/2023 12:23:00 PM This has wonderful flow and beautiful thoughts. Well done. Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 8/22/2023 5:04:00 AM I am sure that the place is too wonderful and beautiful to describe in human terms but you have done a good job with what we have available in human words. Thanks for sharing and for stopping by my page. Sara Login to Reply

Tom Cunningham Date: 8/22/2023 3:32:00 AM You discribed it well Victor. Tom Login to Reply

Mystic Rose Rose Date: 8/22/2023 3:00:00 AM May we all be ready to reach His Holiest of places ones day Victor, but until then, may we find heaven in each others comforting words, Be blessed, know that I'm here :) Login to Reply

Speaks Volumes Date: 8/22/2023 12:12:00 AM Heirs are we to God's bliss, Victor you are right. If we look this way not only once we reach Heaven, but before that here on earth, we should always strive and make plans to be happy. A wonderful code to live by. A very nice Pleiades. Login to Reply

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